Never gonna quit

Never gonna quit

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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life isn't easy...... that what makes it great....

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I turned my back because of my fears

You can see in my the tracks of my tears

Each droplet represent my despair and frustration

As I lower my shoulders to depression

 

Just ruffling my hair in confusion

and biting my lips because of regrets

Each chance I couldn’t get

Make me feel success is just an illusion

 

But no, I will never quit

Even if my hope is little bit

I must try hard and be brave

for not to be shaken by life’s harsh waves.

 


© 2012 Desmund Tiny



Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
We're High, We're Right....Even if life is Rough, We don't Stop!!!




~Boyfriend~

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this is really wonderful....!!!!
very well done...!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


An encouraging poem, very good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Absolutely lovely font, first off.
I like the rhyme scheme you have. You stuck with it and it doesn't seem forced and there's no awkward half-rhymes.
But at times the flow of the poem is a little bit off.
One example is the last two lines of the first stanza. I feel like the third line in the stanza is just a drop too long for the poetry format.
But overall I liked this piece.
Very motivating.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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