Sound of Rain

Sound of Rain

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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We met and fell in love on a rainy day.....

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I came to the usual café

Ordered one hot and creamy Choco Latte

It used to be two orders

When I used to come here with you, my lover

 

Outside the window, rain started to hit the pavement

Reminding me of our sweet and bitter moments

I can hear your voice in the sound of rain

I tried to forget but it all comes back, the pain

 

In this passing wind, we used to cuddle each other

Now I’m fighting this loneliness in this cold weather

I hurt you with my words, throw away all my feelings

I can live without you, I think I’m lying

 

I always think of you as I fall asleep

But in this rainy night, I won’t be able to sleep

You’re always remain in my heart

Now you are a sharp fragment tearing me apart

 

 

Will this rain erase all my regrets?

Dear sky I wish the rain would stop so that I can forget

On a rainy day, I fell for you

On a rainy night, I broke you

 

 


© 2013 Desmund Tiny



Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
"I buried the love in farewell" ~B.A.P.
^w^ lols it's been a long time since the last time I wrote a poem... hahahah hope you like it.... ^w^Y

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"I can hear your voice in the sound of rain

I tried to forget but it all comes back, the pain



In this passing wind, we used to cuddle each other

Now I’m fighting this loneliness in this cold weather"

A poem of bittersweet beauty and longing...Bravo


Posted 4 Years Ago


Very sweet and sad. I almost cried because i went through the same feeling of loss.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I remember you my Poet friend. A very sad poem. Hard to go to places where love and life was once celebrated. I like the description of location, the rain and the loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Desmund Tiny

4 Years Ago

oh thanks for the comment... I really missed writer's cafe.... ^w^
Contradicting emotions. Yes-no.
Nice write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Mixture of emotions...greatly portrayed...
great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on January 17, 2013
Last Updated on January 17, 2013
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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