Rewind

"If time is a video, I want to press the rewind button and stop to that moment."

Thinking back of our great memories

As my clock keeps ticking backwards

To those days our affection and happiness

Until we started to fall apart

 

Forever wandering in time’s maze

Searching for our bond in haze

Go back to that dream like moment

To stay to our good times we spent

 

Reverse to that season of bloom

And forget the present’s doom

I wanna hold you back in my arms

Just like when you and I are warm

 

Turn back to that yesterday

Escape this painful truth and dismay

To see your smiles that stirs up my heart

And NEVER play that GOODBYE part.

Author's Note

Inspired by the Japanese Movie "The girl who leapt thru time" TToTT the ending~

Reviews

[Kuhr Gred]

It's nice to see you here again :)

[Desmund Tiny]

yah active ka pa pala freeeeeee!!!!!!!

[Nightfeather]

I really like this poem. Time is an abstract concept of something that we humans cannot fully explain, for we like to invent concept for something that we view as the 'unknown'. There are many interpretations of time, so there are also thousands of reasons of why people want to alter time. For life would be so much better if we could, just play, resume or rewind at free will, because we are now forced to be played without any chance of rewinding or pausing life. This poem is awesome and the move: "The girl who leapt through time" is a wonderful and awesome movie, in my opinion. I only recommend to change the font, for it was hard to read but the core of your poem was clear. It shows that you lack no talent.

Good job :D

[Thea]

Hugot pa more hahahahaha sounds like a lyrical poem to me :))

[Desmund Tiny]

kase naman eh puro about time ang pinapanuod ko and listening to rewind .... Lyrical poem is my style fre~ TuT