Nightfall

Nightfall

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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The Night is like another world. It is both beautiful and frightening.

"

The bright Sun sets down

With its fading light that makes the sky golden brown

The crickets started to hum

as the dark hours come.

 

The darkness hides the Light

but it didn’t give my heart a fright.

The night’s sweet welcome of silence

takes away all my tense.

 

Both sound and figures disappear.

The loud noises and everything are no longer there.

Even the city lights are covered in murkiness

And it makes my eyes visionless

 

In this peaceful Night,

Only shadows stay behind

These make my blood run cold

But I’m already bewitched by the beauty it holds.

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
Just ignore the grammar problems..... >.<
this poem popped in my mind when I stayed out late yesterday.

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Beautiful write. I love the feel and imagery in this one..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh this is a lovely piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


very descriptive, this makes it feel as if the reader were wandering the dark with you. You captured the feel of a town going to sleep and the night taking hold, gripping the reader with your words. Very well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful! I love the night myself.. it seems so peaceful.. like it can be entering a dream world.. Nice imagery! I like it! =D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is wonderful & beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i enjoyed it i didnt still hinder on the grammar errors...i liked it alot.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i enjoy the night XD great poem... lovin the imagry, kinda beautifull

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful imagery, I especially like that last stanza, how we're sometimes fearful of the night but you were captured within it's beauty that it didn't matter :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A quite beautiful poem, nice penning :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Smile.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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