Beautiful Monster

Beautiful Monster

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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They're human imitations...monsters in human form... but that lovely monster has a heart.

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In the sun’s rays, I want to bask

But the light I desire burns me into ashes

I’m forever a prisoner of the dusk

For I am a creature living in darkness

 

 

Playing under the moonlight

They sparkle, those beautiful ruby eyes

Bewitched, this little prey, he cannot fight

Defying death, body cold as ice

 

 

Feeding in this liquefied life, I can’t resist

Each drop drives me crazy

Forevermore my kind will exist

With this bitter sweet immortality

 

 

This hunger keeps me up at night

The column of your neck I long to taste

My desire to caress you gives me a fright

And I am left in a flurry of haste

 

 

Poison running through my veins

A little kiss will be your death

I will make you hold your breath

I’ll bring you pleasure, I’ll make you insane

 

 

The smell of blood beneath your skin

My fangs slowly sink in silky flesh

Crimson stains are hidden in your black dress

And holding you in my arms is my greatest sin.

 

 

 

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
just ignore the grammars.
I wrote this poem because of my favorite manga and anime.......... ^^, yay

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A flawless piece of work. Excellent imagery.!

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow! i really enjoyed it! Good flow of every line!
This is very wonderful. :))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cool. An excellent piece. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nicely written, its good to take inspration from all around and you did that ! well done (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


pretty interesting

Posted 12 Years Ago


well done write. Terrifying images, good flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is pretty cool

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it! I am a vampire fan and I also love vampire anime :) I like the flow of this, it's a great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am a fan of vampire dairies so I really really enjoyed this write! this was really well written I really liked this and thanks for your review as well :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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