Is there any cure for Jealousy?

Is there any cure for Jealousy?

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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"The time of unrequited love is the happiest" these words are reality's cruel jest when I don't have the chance to show you my love, to have this romance

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When I met you, I thought everything would be great.
But now you have fallen to her
for me, everything is too late
We can never be together

 

I couldn't find the right words to tell you
because I'm so scared, I couldn't even speak
I really want to say "I love you"
but didn’t because I'm a coward, I'm so weak.

 

I know you were disgusted behind those smiles
with this pain, everyone is in denial
I tried my best but you like her instead
and the jealousy is spinning in my head

 

I do feel irritated when I see you together 
but I know I don't have any rights.
I'm not even your lover
but I do love you, I want to hold you so tight

 

I don't mean any harm
I just want to bind you in my arms
why do love have to be intensely possessive
so cruel, these feelings are so massive

 

Is there any cure for these feelings
like some drugs that would stop me from crying
to make me numb whenever I see you
and to make me forget the fact that I loved you

 

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
puchu puchu... it hurts when I see them together.........

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You portrayed the pian so vividly in this piece that the reader cand help but feel sympathetic for the author. This is very well done and eventually these feelings will pass. It just takes time and you have to be patient. But you do have quite a talent for penning such emotional pieces and expressing your feelings through ink

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Damn it, jealousy is a cruel thing in this world. Whoever invented it, I hate him/her, lol, just kidding. In fact, jealousy is a part of our lives. I must say that without it, we will not realize much things. You expressed your pain here greatly.

...Layla...

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem ...
well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


You portrayed the pian so vividly in this piece that the reader cand help but feel sympathetic for the author. This is very well done and eventually these feelings will pass. It just takes time and you have to be patient. But you do have quite a talent for penning such emotional pieces and expressing your feelings through ink

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jealousy is our greatest enemy. It will come and go when it wants to and make us do things we regret later. I was in those sort of predicaments myself but I have to accept it. Sometimes jealousy can make us bad people and that's the saddest part of all. Good poem with painful emotions being dealt here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh yeah jealousy is so hard to take and accept...it takes a long long time to get over it...but does come eventually...poem captures those hard and tough moments brilliantly...excellt poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I have struggled with jealousy my whole life. It's so hard to see the one that you love and have built up to be someone they are not in your mind..just move on like it was nothing to them. This is jealousy at its innocent form..Jealousy also has a very nasty side that can make you react in violent ways. I like how you portrayed this topic as well as the font you chose...which for me represented a letter of sorts...Excellent work Desmund..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


The same girl...Grrr...Adeek yung babaeng yun eh, dalawa2 pa...Haha! XD
Buti ka pa, lola, s babae ngseselos ako sa GAY...Wohohoho! Joke! XD
Nice, nice... :)))


Posted 12 Years Ago


Such pain and sorrow with the loss that you feel.. very sad...but well said..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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