Miles of Memories

Written today about my ex.

Miles of Memories

 

You want to

Get out of here

Get away from me

Get away from

The memories

Our past

But putting miles

Between us

Won’t change

How you feel

What happened

What was said

And done

I will still

Find my way

In your heart

And on your mind

I will be

Every breath

That leaves

Your body

Everything

You touch

Will feel like

Me

Everything you see

Will remind you

Of me

I wish you

The best

Of luck

In your new world

But the old

The past

Will always

Always

Finds its way

Back to you

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Let you know if I like it? Ok, I like it. :) That was easy haha. Breakups always suck horridly, always has to be some roughness to them. But of course, it's two people who hjad feelings for one another at some point, so it's to be expected. Your words in this poem ring true, until time heals the wound, whether heartbeaker or heartbreakee, it's unavoidable to stumble across something that'll widen the tear in the gaping hole in your chest. Great work again, as always.

[Whiskurz]

I really enjoyed this.....Keep writing.....Whisk

[Dani R.]

really interesting format, grabbed my attention. Really genuine emotion as well. Great work!

[Monica]

I love it! It's so well written and heartfelt. I love the passion put into your words, letting him know that "everything you see will remind you of me"...powerful emotions. I can relate to your poem, most people can; that's what makes it a wonderful write!

[S. Michael Long]

there are far too many great women writers out here today.. writing beautiful songs and poems.. about THIS GUY... but those wonderful writers never tell their readers.. they never allow the readers.. to hold the weight and measure.. to see for themselves.. exactly who THIS GUY is.. and why he sucks! (i know why he sucks.. but.. as a reader.. i want to hear it in a poem) again.. nice write! -s

[S. Michael Long]

outcomes and final measures means.. (sorry for not elaborating) I want to know just how much his choices hurt him.. and how they benefited you.. what his foolish choice left him without, and what it left you with..

[S. Michael Long]

you leave it up to destiny.. and that is what chastens us as the readers.. chastise the fool not the reader.. we are longing for the whole story but all we get is intent.. i want outcomes and final measures. (: LOVELY WRITE! -S

[S. Michael Long]

possessive, but missing a final impact or direction to explain the possession, its a wonderfully well thought out poem.. it has good metric.. i liked the form.. Keep it up! -s

[MOON]

Lovely poignant write , you can run but you cant hide.

[pinpen]

I like this write alot, i think you did a wonderful write here.