Red Crown

Red Crown

A Poem by Red Crown
"

Against the judgement, I'll value my dreams.

"

I won't belong to the sky

I will follow my way,

Against the lord of the light

Against the sacred king


My blades shall raid through the night

Seeking my enemy

I won't give up from the fight

I'll tune the symphony


'cause my dreams may not be right

but let my heart be free


Although it's so hard

And buried in agony

She gave me her smile

That's all I need to see


I won't belong to the sky

I will follow my way

There's no fear in my heart

I have no destiny


My red, bloody fate

No longer tortures me

Before the burning gates

I deny the prophecy


Among the beasts I'm the odd,

It's not the wish of God

But I have no regrets to think of

She's everything I truly love.



© 2010 Red Crown



Author's Note

Red Crown
Just keep in mind that this is not a satanist poem.

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A very thought-provoking write! You posed a lot of interesting questions in this piece, yet in a really subtle, relatable way. I thought that your use of imagery through metaphors was incredible, particularly in the second stanza. For such a powerful poem, I thought that the ending was a little bit weak, but overall, I enjoyed reading this! A captivating, deep poem. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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is this like a song!! its cute i like it and good color choice

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a good piece. A strong cry to follow one's own path.
I like this stanza best:
"Although it's so hard
And buried in agony
She gave me her smile
That's all I need to see"

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very thought-provoking write! You posed a lot of interesting questions in this piece, yet in a really subtle, relatable way. I thought that your use of imagery through metaphors was incredible, particularly in the second stanza. For such a powerful poem, I thought that the ending was a little bit weak, but overall, I enjoyed reading this! A captivating, deep poem. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

is this about love Nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, EPIC :)
It's very good, just add a bit more to it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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