All Of Me

All of me, belongs to only you.
You had me very suddenly, the moment we said I do.
I knew you for a long time, but never really seen.
The man that was right in front of me or what we would come to be.
You were just a little boy, three years younger than me.
That I never truly realized, you'd be the man of my dreams.
I didn't believe in fairy tales, now we have our very own.
How did we get so lucky, to be living our love song.
You came at the right moment, & treated my daughter like your own.
Then we had another daughter, that finally completed our home.
Almost nine years later & still going very strong.
Now I finally see what I never could believe.
That God put you here, & he made you just for me.

Reviews

[Cameron Miller]

I think this is a spectacular story, the only thing I noticed was the theme was a poem, where as this is more of a story or a sonnet. Other then that. You did an amazing job! I loved how I could picture it all in my head. :D

[Dglmr]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete story written with gentleness and kindness. I liked the positive flow of thoughts leading to a happy ending. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Dglmr]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem and you are welcome.