Wings Of A Butterfly

Wings Of A Butterfly

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

Wings of a butterfly

develope within.

Within the cocoon

when sheltered and

protected from terrible

things like the strong winds.

 

Wings of a butterfly

are delicate and frail.

Just like the souls and

bodies of young children,

seeking shelter and protection

from the ugly monsters doing wrong to them.

 

If not protected the butterfly wings

will shatter and flake and if we do

not protect our children from the

human monsters, their futures will

be scattered and mislpaced.

 

See the beauty in the butterfly wings

and think of how fragile your young

child's life is.

 

Protect them both,

make it your fight. They both are too

fragile to make it their fight.

 

Enjoy the Beauty of the Butterfly

Wings And watching healthy futures

of the children you protect and breed.

 

As parents it is your main responsibilty!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson


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This is a truly beautiful poem. It comunicates tenderness, care and love.
I believe you should change the last verse with something less commanding, but in the rest it's great :).

A.M.


Posted 15 Years Ago


what a beautiful description of a butterfly.
great job

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love it, its so beautifully written!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

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