Ohh excellent my friend what a lovely job you ve done here..
it was just like my day .i was so restless this day..for you know me i just cant accept things that are not right
but everything seems to must go wrong so they be accepted.and i look like the weird one,this is a sign of our time
they just wont take you if you are normal,but if you twist the fact and go round the bend ,steal ,or may play with money
in unlawful way..if you dont stand with the strong even if he is so wrong ..or if you stand with the weak they hit you hard
till break your back..and madness of killing ,just look into the news ,they get all sorts of pretext just to kill in the name of religion
or democracy or civilizacion..millionares i see build some huge mansions around my place..while so many many are dying of hunger
its madness everywhere and i am restless all the time..for i just cant see these things ,yet i can do nothing
i really enjoyed what you wrote..that was exactly my feelings at the moment ..
lovely write..
"I saw madness sleep with sanity
in Tracey's unmade bed" I love this line,
Two great poems, they are both good, personally, I prefer the first,
But hay, what do I know?
Ohh excellent my friend what a lovely job you ve done here..
it was just like my day .i was so restless this day..for you know me i just cant accept things that are not right
but everything seems to must go wrong so they be accepted.and i look like the weird one,this is a sign of our time
they just wont take you if you are normal,but if you twist the fact and go round the bend ,steal ,or may play with money
in unlawful way..if you dont stand with the strong even if he is so wrong ..or if you stand with the weak they hit you hard
till break your back..and madness of killing ,just look into the news ,they get all sorts of pretext just to kill in the name of religion
or democracy or civilizacion..millionares i see build some huge mansions around my place..while so many many are dying of hunger
its madness everywhere and i am restless all the time..for i just cant see these things ,yet i can do nothing
i really enjoyed what you wrote..that was exactly my feelings at the moment ..
lovely write..
I write , mainly poetry, about anything and everything. I have written song lyrics and seem to be addicted to rhyming. I hate writing blurbs for blogs as I never know what to say...
I often confuse.. more..