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The Flying Rock

The Flying Rock

A Poem by Dinesh Unlimited
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imaginary

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A rock, big rock 

Sees someting eerie 

Remains at a shock 

Ponders a fairy 

A bird flying high 

In the dark, blue sky

 

 

Strives to fly 

But fail

Frowns at the sky

Fell into a dale

Does not quit

Gets a hold of bird flock 

Face, delightfully lit

Enjoys a lot, the rock

 

 

 

                                                                       DINESH KUMAR CHAUHAN


© 2018 Dinesh Unlimited



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Was the word "someting" in stanza one, line two, meant to be someting or something? if the word is someting it adds an amazing layer to the poem. Other than that the poem is amazing, great imagery. Thank you.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Well expressed
Beautiful

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pure scenes of nature and hopes to elevate to higher levels, sometimes we need to accept that our place is on the ground, well written very unususl🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 9, 2016
Last Updated on February 8, 2018

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Dinesh Unlimited
Dinesh Unlimited

Mandi, Dhawan, India



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I am Dinesh Kumar Chauhan. I am writing since 12. I am 18. I had been interested in poetry. I enjoy writing poems. I am a natural born poet. Beside all this I have interest in cooking, playing basketb.. more..

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