The sunlight far off..

The seasons drifting over trees..

Sitting silent so
Inside the womb of winter
Leafless curse of fall
A promise of faith at spring
Trees stare at sunlight far off.



Badges (Contest wins)

Wintery Sun Winner! (Sunrise to Sunset)

bronze medal (Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Poet Craft: Form Tanka ~ with Salvatore Buttaci!)

Tree of Knowledge (Tree Poetry)

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

short, sweet and real beautiful. i've said this before and i'll say it again, you sure know how to write great poems which are short. i find myself far too caught up in everything to ever shrink any of my poems down to that size. this is really nice work man.

"A promise of faith at spring
Trees stare the sunlight far away."
amazing words, man

[Desert Dreamer]

Wise trees, knowing to wait for the sun, we can learn so much from trees.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Very nice!

[July]

I love short, pithy poetry that has depth of meaning...it seems to be worth so much when you say a great deal in very few words. fantastic.

[~~~~~]

A beautiful, imaginative piece of writing. I have yet to try this form. I find Haiku hard enough. However, this is a lovely poetic rendition of the seasons and the alliteration transitions throughout the piece flawlessly.

[bbb]

A poem like this brings a moment of peace into my life, thanks for writing it.

[Marie Harrison]

Very charming poem, I love the visions it puts in my head. Leaving me peacefully to mull over the changing of seasons.

[Legion]

Well done. Much better. Let's not forget The Hope of Summer. Kudos.

[Ima]

Trees stare at sunlight far off.
~beautiful~

[LittleGlassWings]

Very interesting and beautiful little poem. :)