Live a rainy day

Do you wish to learn how to live a rainy day?

The first November chilling rain
Has come upon my eaves.
The house of heaven pours again,
To touch and dust the leaves.

A lot of raindrops drench the ground;
Another on the trees.
A little sunshine comes around,
To rest in silent ease.

The cuckoos sing their endless song
And far the ravens caw.
In rainy days, the days are long,
In all of nature's law.

The clouds are like a dying rose;
The sky in grayish grow,
The Earth has bathed in sweet repose;
A rainbow up above.

A hearty hold of wishing yearn,
It passes by my way-
One more evening to watch and learn,
To live a rainy day.



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Reviews

[Sonali]

a perfect rhyme except for the lines
The sky in grayish grow

A rainbow up above
try n adjust that.
the alliteration of grayish grow brings in a feel of the rainy seasonso try to change the other line.suggestion--
The clouds are like a dying rose;
The sky in grayish grow.
The earth has bathed in sweet repose
Embossing up above a rainbow.
:)

[PoppySilver]

Never love! LMAO
I don't think so, go for it, thats what I say lol
This is beautiful hon, as always!
A rainy day lived through and lessons that can be shared lol
Awesome!
Nature suits you hon!
Hugs
xx

[Nimbus Thread]

No....never. To observe nature, all its nuances is evoking to the soul and to all minds. It inspires teaches and sooths the weary wanderer. It's a gorgeous poem. Keep inspiring us all!

[Madame Mystique]

There is no such thing as " too many odes to nature" mother nature deserves it :)

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

lol Nope it isn't You paint them as if they are a masterpiece of many colors upon a painting thank you for such beauty. God bless lily

[Charles]

Writing about nature is not bad for the health - health food makes me sick, though. This poem has a nice feel and sound. I especially like the first stanza. The only line that stands apart as something less than the others is 'the sky in grayish grow' - the syntax doesn't see quite right. In the same stanza the rhyme 'grow' and 'above' is weak - maybe you could adjust this a bit. Nice poem by any standards.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beatifully written. Actually I think writting nature poems are a great way of experessing how nice our surrounings are and sometimes you forget that, until you read something as nice as this poem..

[Crimson Wolf]

I love this as much as I love rainy days when I'm indoors and that's a whole lot! This is outstanding all the way around.

[Kes]

Ugh, I'm so jealous of your fantastic ability to conjure up imagery from simple words on a page.

[Matthews Reggie]

wonderful write.... perfect imagery, rhyme scheme and creative use of words....

[heich]

A heartful hold of wishing yearn,
It passes by my way;
One more evening to watch and learn,
To live a rainy day.

looooove thissss.....