Any other night

One of those nights..

I've wished I could enjoy the night,

and love it for the last of light

it's retained of the day.

I've looked at it, but for that stare,

nor sleeping earth and sweeping air,

nor speaking trees can lay

my heart out, my silent heart out.

The wanderers have gone about:

No one shall embark

this path, while through the deeper dark

they leave behind a man who might

make something of this night.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a very fine poem, I read it aloud and was not only impressed by the structure, (I think a three line verse is great) but by the your talent for observation and the way you transport it into fine English,like so many of the poets from India.
A remarkable poem, excellent.

[MOON]

This poem has beautiful flow and such wisdom.

[Cancelled]

Wow, ever thought of writing a love poem?