Some Man

Just something I wrote and thought I would share my fellings about some things..

Some man you are. Beating your wife kids. They bruise and welp but you don't care.Some ma you are. Raping your only child for some sick reason. You do it day in and day out but you dont realize who you are... Well let me tell you. Your a worthless waste of f*****g space! Your a heartles sadistic monster who deserves to die. You think your a man because you have something dangaling between your legs. News flash mother f****r, REAL men don't there wife and children. A real man takes time out of his day to spend time with them and ask them how there day was. A real man is not you... You are a p***y. Someone who hides behind his or her lies and thinks wrong means right. It is peopole like you who cause scuicides. If you gave you children and wife the respect they deserve, maybe they wouldn't be contemplating if there life is worth living. So I stand up and applaud to all of those people who have or are going through this. I applaud for you hoping to give you the strength you need to live through it. Thank you for your time...

 

Dustin "Sexy P3nguin" Davis, December 16, 2009

Reviews

[Jacqueline Lopez]

I love your message, it's very strong and I applaud you for it!

[Cassandra D.]

This was a very deep write here that would completely make anyone think twice before doing anything to anyone.

[The Scanners See Sound]

I dont see how this is a poem, story, or anything outside of maybe a personal journal entry.

Which begs the question; why is this here?

[Annabel Lee]

once again- more amazing writing. some ppl suck :-(

[Mimi]

Thank you so much for writing about this, it made me smile at how much you care. I love you so much for writing this. Keep writing, babe.

~Mimi

[ZmH]

i love this poem dusty its very true

[Blue Rose]

Very very true....Our world today is disgusting!! Fabulous work!

[Luna]

I love the passion. fix the few grammatical errors and the left out words and it would be great! thanks for posting!

[Chelsea.]

Wow.
This is.. it doesnt have words, .
I think EVERY man who does this should read this, or have it screamed in their face.
I like your viewpoint.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Rate: 100 % for the passion with which you
write.

------ Eagle Cruagh