The Burning Desire – 2

The desire continues......

 

It’s an anxiously magnetic world,

Your words are hypnotizing my wits,

What have you done to me,

Just a click away is my blitz.

 

Shrouded thy eyes with your dreams,

I pounced on screen to continue,

You cascade your Number in flash,

My ecstasy scrolled to renew.

 

The desires shredded fires,

Instantly I dialled my destiny,

The ringing bell was extremely sluggish,

My heart beat was tapping in scrutiny.

 

That longest 5 seconds of my life,

Comes to a halt on your “Hello”,

Damn!  I was speechless & astonishingly silent,

Yet my ear wants your words to swallow.

 

You soon disconnect the connection,

Our ears had with our heart,

My world was flying high in elation,

As if I was ripped off of every dearth.

 

 

I messaged you and you replied back,

Love you My Honey, Is that you?

A simple yes of mine,

Started sweetie journey anew.

 

And then second turned into minutes,

Minutes bowed to hours of bliss,

The sensational inferno seems dual,   

Atmosphere submerged in passion of kiss

 

 Then one day you asked me,

“Honey is this our true love’s attire”,

I said wrapping you in my eyes,

“My sweet heart this is “The Burning Desire””

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

What I really enjoy here is the very grand style applied to a normal kind of situation,this is very cleverly written,mock-heroic transported into the present day, well written with a lot of thought and care, good work.

[Cathy Wattam]

Great continuation here. If you continue this way, who knows - it could become a novel! I liked it thanks.

[Renée J. Martin]

Wow !

[Manpreet]

Vow! beautiful journey! very romantic and intense. "AND SENSUOUS"

[leighgreen]

I like the continuation from your other piece and the seemingly casual way it fits together, nicely written

[Robbie]

I loved the last two stanzas....This was a lighthearted, entertaining, and fast paced read. Nicely done!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Diwakar, I was particulary moved by 'The Warrior of Wil'- a v. special poem. Please take a look at my work also. I will sift through more of your work over time and please stay in touch. Sheema

[CourtneyShay]

dang it i wish yu would call me

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. the personal actions and words are the things we need to hear and know. I like the flow of thoughts and the very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[I'm Just me:)]

interesting, very good descriptions, and its all around wonderful i love it 100%