A Notion

A Notion

A Poem by Dizzy
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Ramling thoughts that seemed to come together.

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I thought in my head just a thought that probably shouldnt be said. 
Spiraling down these stairs i think the theory over with more fears.
 A Treacherous notion of lost intention. 
Contemplating judgment is dangerous and may take things over the edge. 
Suffocating under the weight of myself.
Losing to this idea that society wishes for me to believe.
 Intake of this force-fed crap.
 I lead myself to believe that this world can handle what I have to throw at it. 
Broken pieces of life gathered together rant and rave and are strewn together in disruptive organization. 

© 2010 Dizzy


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your ramblings definately did come together and made a wonderful poem....love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


and i never thought that you will write something so agressive... i love the way you have penned you anger in this piece... found it to be very "in the face" piece where the writer would love to show her middle finger to the world and gives a flying f@#k to how the world reacts to it...
oops! guess m going overboard...its time i should stop...
excellent piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


PERFECT.

Posted 13 Years Ago


My, I have just read a poem about "rage" and now yours! Seems like the poets are angry today, Is it a full moon or something??! lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


WOW this is throught provoaking very nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes
another good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


You definitely get your point across, I liked the flow of the poem at the beginning with the rhyming. Keep up the good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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