He is.

He is.

A Poem by Dizzy
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Mine...

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A blur of inception.
Eyes so green. 
Face of perfection.
Lips plump and pink 
A lost direction.
Curly brown hair
Life's new infection.
Mucsles cascade deep
my perfect addiction.

© 2010 Dizzy


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Ty all for your Reviews. I'm sorry I've been offline for so long! It's gonna be hard catching up again. haha

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this poem so much! The rhythm is perfect and I love how the words flow and you create a wonderful image with your descriptions. Truly amazing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved the strong emotion that this poem emits I really liked the boldness and overall structure of this piece I must read more of your work very well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow, this poem was short but it was absolutely perfect. i loved the description and the ending was just right. good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Pros: I love the rhyming. And the description is good, though concise.

Cons: None that I can think of really.

Overall: A good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really good it is a matter of fact in style and just awesome as a whole.

Good work.

*notice*
I am in no way obligating you to read my work I enjoy reading poetry on this site and like to read and review whenever I can so thanks for the poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, I want that addiction, im so jealous lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow. another great piece..this gives a new depth to love, I like how you decribe it as an addiction. =))

Posted 13 Years Ago


addiction!
no wonder!
good job!
i liked it... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was So good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2010
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Dizzy
Dizzy

Wichita, KS



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