Monsoon

Monsoon

A Poem by Gautham Sathyan
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Nature's beauty

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The wait is over,
for the seasonal change,
nourished crops,
with the monsoon arrived,
from the blossoming of trees,
to harvesting of seeds,
grounded by the moist air,
nature in its utmost core,
people cherished,
the moment of life,
above it sways,
and below it rains,
children danced,
as the raindrops fell,
drizzled rain,
implanted the seed of life,
suppressed by the outer force,
created a larger picture,
with the new beginning,
the farmer smiled.



© 2018 Gautham Sathyan



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Lyrical and beautiful poem. Lovely flow and eloquent, descriptive imagery of the Monsoon cycle and the people whose lives depend on it. “Above it sways, and below it rains.”- life and death hang in the balance of of the growth of seeds. Powerful, pristine, important. Well-done.



Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gautham Sathyan

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot Annette, I'm glad you enjoyed :)



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I loved the last line... It's so beautiful! I liked this piece a lot.. keep writing!

Posted 20 Hours Ago


Beautiful flow and imagery! I really love this. My favorite lines: "nature in its utmost core,
people cherished, the moment of life," It really captures the essence of this poem. Thank you for sharing a piece of your mind.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Gautham Sathyan

3 Days Ago

You are welcome:)
Yeah .so nice . simply live change you captured!!

Posted 6 Days Ago


Gautham Sathyan

6 Days Ago

Thank you Pooja :) :)
"above it sways and below it rains" - that is the captivating point in this poem

Posted 6 Days Ago


Gautham Sathyan

6 Days Ago

Thank you!
Lyrical and beautiful poem. Lovely flow and eloquent, descriptive imagery of the Monsoon cycle and the people whose lives depend on it. “Above it sways, and below it rains.”- life and death hang in the balance of of the growth of seeds. Powerful, pristine, important. Well-done.



Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gautham Sathyan

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot Annette, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Beautiful imagery to describe the force of nature! Well done!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gautham Sathyan

1 Week Ago

Thank you!
Life springs forth and children dancing in the rain. What a beautiful picture this is. The entire piece is a joy to read.
And with the farmer your readers also smile. Lovely work!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gautham Sathyan

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot Effie! I'm glad you enjoyed :) :) :)
After months of scorching heat, I can imagine the joy of rainfall, soaking the ground, encouraging new growth, where none existed before. The landscape must completely change. Never experienced it, but I can imagine. Descriptive writing, nicely done.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gautham Sathyan

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot Chris 😊. I'm glad you. Enjoyed!
it`s the same way with all life

Posted 1 Week Ago


Wonderful write about the ways of nature ;-]

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Gautham Sathyan

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot 😊

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Added on June 12, 2018
Last Updated on June 13, 2018
Tags: Monsoon, rain, life, farmer, crops.

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Gautham Sathyan
Gautham Sathyan

India



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