Anything and Everything

Anything and Everything

A Poem by Krishna
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My first sonnet.

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Battles, conquests, adventures of yore,
myriads of stars, a solitary tree,
facts known to all, new-found lore,
descriptions of wonders only you can see.

Antics of others, the life of a dog,
sea-faring captain, soprano now mute,
thief in the night, ghosts in the fog,
champions, jesters, wizards astute.

Spaceships, aliens, a dying sun,
futures unknown, lost times of old,
with clever twist, a witty pun,
straightforward premise, mystery to unfold.

From thought to thought, line to line link'd,
all in a writer's craft, with pen on paper ink'd.

© 2010 Krishna



Author's Note

Krishna
This is my first attempt at a sonnet -- it's neither iambic nor in pentameter, but the rhyme scheme is there. Feedback much appreciated.

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beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


Congrats on this great winning poem. Well Done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Congratulations!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very fine sonnet!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A wonderful first attempt at a sonnet! Well done....keep up the good work and thank you for submitting this to Ivor's contest. Helena

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rhyme scheme is pretty good but the lack of meter is all too obvious And meter is essential to this form
In fact meter is essential to make your words flow smoothly read aloud.The acid test for all poetry

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really good, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah I love this and the turn of phrase is excellent

Posted 7 Years Ago


it really good for a first attempt! keep up the great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Krishna
Krishna

Arcadia, CA



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