Us

We don't know it... yet

But it's us

We are destroying our world... ourselves... our conviction

We are like water down a waterfall

We run the course the river of fate has chosen for us

We all bring ourselves down until our end

And over time, we weather away the Earth

As this happens, the distance between the begining and end gets shorter

But... notice how we still flow after the waterfall

That's because there is hope...

Reviews

[misha]

Amazing write that makes one think. Great job!

[Wolfwind]

You speak a strong voice in these words. I'm reminded of Garth Brook's "The River" as I read your ink. We are very much both the water and what sails upon it. We take the good with the bad and continue to drift, sail, paddle or swim, wherever the course is going to take us. Sometimes we have control, many times we don't. In the end, it's true, what carries us through is hope.

Great Ink! Thanks for sharing!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Sami Khalil]

"We are like water down a waterfall

We run the course the river of fate has chosen for us

We all bring ourselves down until our end

And over time, we weather away the Earth"

I like this poem alot. Those lines are great...:)