Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

A Poem by Silente
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Insanity Pleads...

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My chemistry betrays me as insanity pleads before lean-jaded depravity
seen scorn as a decrepit unraveling
of baffling mean-spirited entities gathering deceitfully
for more pandering of reality in a gallery slinging misery entirely...

My sympathy behaves erratically
seethes forlorn as heated apathy forms rapidly
soft-churning rhapsody squirms passionately...

Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs.

Fiendishly hard-earned philosophy
turns of metaphor laced individuality...

Blurred and slurred rhymes.

Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism
this organisms mechanism of limelight fading posturism
burning eyes turning bright from realism
shading light from mine minds rind empty escapism
slime heavy kinda heady with the infectious algorithm...

 Swirls bleeding lecherous breathing escaping the rhythm of morbid reality
 curiosity yearns for instability
With the itty-bitty fallacy of a gallant killing spree
 gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy
 floating dead in the sea flamboyantly... 

© 2017 Silente



Author's Note

Silente
Same poem (mostly)... But now edited... Yay...!

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Man, you can just read this without even trying to understand it one bit and it just sings with juxtaposed vowel sounds anyway!
Of course, within it are sadly beautiful, precisely placed emotionally philosophical condensations of the deepest shadow, as though we are in the furthest interior recesses of another, at the coal face of the 'mind's mine', each verbal energy forged with the perfectly chosen markers that are conveyed by all of these, this collection of flowing and desperately tragic feeling words.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

You nailed it, to be succinct and simplistic with my words... But in all honesty... I like how you s.. read more
Brett Hernan

4 Months Ago

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Very tragic and dark but true words spoken of existing human atrocities!! Great write!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! How wonderfully you have stitched words in the poem. I could've never thought the way you look at things! What an eloquent and enjoyble piece. I'm very very impressed!
Keep writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Wow, why thank you, Soumya... I appreciate the impressive appreciation very much...
A chaotic life that twist reality within the mind forming all kinds of catastrophic thoughts. Pinch in a little anger brewing and you get this mixed blender of emotions

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

You slammed the door shut on this one, Poetic... Hah, nice insight, a catastrophic review of blended.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Months Ago

I'm glad I understood your poem.
Silente

3 Months Ago

You should be gladder than glad... Thanks again
Just hearing it sounds good even if I don't try to decipher the meaning, although I do recognize the tags. Keep writing my friend.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Relic... Meaning is overrated... As is contextual perspective... Take what you will, and .. read more
I love your use of vocabulary and rhyme schemes. "Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism" I love your writing, it's very enjoyable. Thanks!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

I love your appreciation! That was a fun line to write... Glad you enjoyed... Thanks, and you are we.. read more
Lyrical poignant write with words that sing , I need a dictionary...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Moon, it means a lot to hear
The word combinations are epic! through gallons of prayers, and desperate escape from reality we coat ourselves with an impenetrable veil of ignorance... Definitely an addition to my library :D

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

I always welcome the insight of someone with such excellent music taste... Keep rocking the strings,.. read more
Ana B.

4 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
Yup. Again, the rhythm and cadence flows. "...gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy floating dead in the sea flamboyantly": genius. I totally got that...I think. Lots of people's prayers are just words and never get past the ceiling. I like your stuff, dude, and I'm not really a poetry kinda person, but you...you are a good read.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Well thank you again, Carol... It means a lot to me to know I can help bend genres a bit in peoples .. read more
Very intense, yet I love the feeling of it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Intense things are sometimes the most loved things, Maria... Thanks
Man, you can just read this without even trying to understand it one bit and it just sings with juxtaposed vowel sounds anyway!
Of course, within it are sadly beautiful, precisely placed emotionally philosophical condensations of the deepest shadow, as though we are in the furthest interior recesses of another, at the coal face of the 'mind's mine', each verbal energy forged with the perfectly chosen markers that are conveyed by all of these, this collection of flowing and desperately tragic feeling words.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

You nailed it, to be succinct and simplistic with my words... But in all honesty... I like how you s.. read more
Brett Hernan

4 Months Ago

Do you know any musicians?

If not, put up a hand-written sign at the local guitar sh.. read more

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Silente

Denver, CO



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