Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

A Poem by Silente
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Insanity Pleads...

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My chemistry betrays me as insanity pleads before lean-jaded depravity
seen scorn as a decrepit unraveling
of baffling mean-spirited entities gathering deceitfully
for more pandering of reality in a gallery slinging misery entirely...

My sympathy behaves erratically
seethes forlorn as heated apathy forms rapidly
soft-churning rhapsody squirms passionately...

Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs.

Fiendishly hard-earned philosophy
turns of metaphor laced individuality...

Blurred and slurred rhymes.

Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism
this organisms mechanism of limelight fading posturism
burning eyes turning bright from realism
shading light from mine minds rind empty escapism
slime heavy kinda heady with the infectious algorithm...

 Swirls bleeding lecherous breathing escaping the rhythm of morbid reality
 curiosity yearns for instability
With the itty-bitty fallacy of a gallant killing spree
 gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy
 floating dead in the sea flamboyantly... 

© 2017 Silente



Author's Note

Silente
Same poem (mostly)... But now edited... Yay...!

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Man, you can just read this without even trying to understand it one bit and it just sings with juxtaposed vowel sounds anyway!
Of course, within it are sadly beautiful, precisely placed emotionally philosophical condensations of the deepest shadow, as though we are in the furthest interior recesses of another, at the coal face of the 'mind's mine', each verbal energy forged with the perfectly chosen markers that are conveyed by all of these, this collection of flowing and desperately tragic feeling words.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

6 Months Ago

You nailed it, to be succinct and simplistic with my words... But in all honesty... I like how you s.. read more
Brett Hernan

6 Months Ago

Do you know any musicians?

If not, put up a hand-written sign at the local guitar sh.. read more



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It reads like Lewis Carrol riffing on Emily Dickinson at first and as cool a trick as that is. their is a confessional quality to the impression, that it projects onto the reader that is astounding.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Once again, I really like this one a lot becuz it seems like the meaning of the message is more prominent than your rhyming, which is always good, but better when it doesn't distract from your message. I very much like the intensity of imagery here, which is contrasted by a seeming nonplussed attitude about it all. Great job. I haven't had a chance to check out your new rhyming website (thanks for the invite) but I was slammed by a pain flare for a week (fibromyalgia) & now I'm just starting to come alive again! *whew!* I'll get there sooner or later! *smile* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Appreciate the review, Barley, and do not worry... It is a very laid-back thing... No obligation or .. read more
This reads to me like a kind of mental breakdown; where the chemical concoction that flows through the body and maintains sanity has been thrown into a headspin by the own insanity of one's reality. Does that make sense?

This is another multilayered write; many different possible meanings can be gleaned from this one. And as always the rap style format spins like a literary whirlwind. How you managed to edit this, i have no idea!
Unique as ever.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Since all "emotion" is just a chemical reaction... It makes perfect sense... One can only handle "pe.. read more
Must admit. I am quite jeleous of your vocabulary. Your choice of words and how flawlessly they sound when put together and read out. Supurb write and spot on silnete

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

99 percent of what is posted here took 15 minutes... This post took three days...! While i admit tha.. read more
Jackie

1 Month Ago

I appreciate the encouragement. Every now and than i do. And yes from top of the head can be a real .. read more
Silente

1 Month Ago

Most welcome, mate, and you as well...
I am not surprised that 'insanity pleads'. The so called sanity in life often seems far more insane! Your wonderful poem is full of clever and evocative words. ( one word I did not understand 'shading light from my minds RIND?) The rhyme scheme is interesting, and the words move along beautifully, although with a slight feeling of 'blurred and slurred'. Was this deliberate? And although those rippling prayers stripped of bouyancy' were dead, there somehow seems to be some hope in that they were floating flamboyantly. Enjoyable read.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Lmao......
Great Aunt Astri

1 Month Ago

Ugh? ................?
Silente

1 Month Ago

I have no clue anymore... Brain-frozen spoons...?
Very tragic and dark but true words spoken of existing human atrocities!! Great write!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! How wonderfully you have stitched words in the poem. I could've never thought the way you look at things! What an eloquent and enjoyble piece. I'm very very impressed!
Keep writing!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

Wow, why thank you, Soumya... I appreciate the impressive appreciation very much...
A chaotic life that twist reality within the mind forming all kinds of catastrophic thoughts. Pinch in a little anger brewing and you get this mixed blender of emotions

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

You slammed the door shut on this one, Poetic... Hah, nice insight, a catastrophic review of blended.. read more
Poetic Beauty

5 Months Ago

I'm glad I understood your poem.
Silente

5 Months Ago

You should be gladder than glad... Thanks again
Just hearing it sounds good even if I don't try to decipher the meaning, although I do recognize the tags. Keep writing my friend.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Relic... Meaning is overrated... As is contextual perspective... Take what you will, and .. read more
I love your use of vocabulary and rhyme schemes. "Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism" I love your writing, it's very enjoyable. Thanks!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

I love your appreciation! That was a fun line to write... Glad you enjoyed... Thanks, and you are we.. read more

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Silente

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