Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

A Poem by Chase Dylan
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Insanity Pleads...

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My chemistry betrays me as insanity pleads before lean-jaded depravity
seen scorn as a decrepit unraveling
of baffling mean-spirited entities gathering deceitfully
for more pandering of reality in a gallery slinging misery entirely...

My sympathy behaves erratically
seethes forlorn as heated apathy forms rapidly
soft-churning rhapsody squirms passionately...

Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs.

Fiendishly hard-earned philosophy
turns of metaphor laced individuality...

Blurred and slurred rhymes.

Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism
this organisms mechanism of limelight fading posturism
burning eyes turning bright from realism
shading light from mine minds rind empty escapism
slime heavy kinda heady with the infectious algorithm...

 Swirls bleeding lecherous breathing escaping the rhythm of morbid reality
 curiosity yearns for instability
With the itty-bitty fallacy of a gallant killing spree
 gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy
 floating dead in the sea flamboyantly... 

© 2017 Chase Dylan


Author's Note

Chase Dylan
Same poem (mostly)... But now edited... Yay...!

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the velocity of your perspicacity of the duplicity of words specificity makes the bunny's brain nuerocity spark enthusiastically! LOL.... my god I have met my match!!!! You love words and they love you I know cause they just told me my dictionary just salivated all over my desk and started to groan in an unsightly manner causing me to have to clean up some unmentionable goo... be sure to put the dictionary farther away from the word porn next time. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

4 Years Ago

Words are fun, flow structure is what this was intended for, aha... I f*****g died laughing when I s.. read more



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The word combinations are epic! through gallons of prayers, and desperate escape from reality we coat ourselves with an impenetrable veil of ignorance... Definitely an addition to my library :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

I always welcome the insight of someone with such excellent music taste... Keep rocking the strings,.. read more
Ana B.

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Yup. Again, the rhythm and cadence flows. "...gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy floating dead in the sea flamboyantly": genius. I totally got that...I think. Lots of people's prayers are just words and never get past the ceiling. I like your stuff, dude, and I'm not really a poetry kinda person, but you...you are a good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Well thank you again, Carol... It means a lot to me to know I can help bend genres a bit in peoples .. read more
Very intense, yet I love the feeling of it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Intense things are sometimes the most loved things, Maria... Thanks
Man, you can just read this without even trying to understand it one bit and it just sings with juxtaposed vowel sounds anyway!
Of course, within it are sadly beautiful, precisely placed emotionally philosophical condensations of the deepest shadow, as though we are in the furthest interior recesses of another, at the coal face of the 'mind's mine', each verbal energy forged with the perfectly chosen markers that are conveyed by all of these, this collection of flowing and desperately tragic feeling words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

You nailed it, to be succinct and simplistic with my words... But in all honesty... I like how you s.. read more
Brett Hernan

6 Years Ago

Do you know any musicians?

If not, put up a hand-written sign at the local guitar sh.. read more
I can not pretend to understand the meaning of this poem. Though, that's likely more a fault of mine than of your writing. I do like the alliteration and splashy choice of words. I've been told to avoid alliteration because it's tacky, but you, my friend, have found a niche with it. Like someone who's mastered the yo yo, you've taken something simple and honed it down to an impressive skill

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Seeing as I love Yo-Yo's... I will take that as a grand compliment, haha... Thank you, No Scholar, b.. read more
it's like delving into the mind of a mass murderer...and the things that have pushed him to the brink of the insanity...the mind breaking...the tolerance ended---even if there really is no reason---the monster is created...you delve into his mind like dean koontz gets into the head of his evil characters...then we have more of an understanding...and sometimes even a bit of sympathy for the devil..so to speak.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Did you just compare me to Dean Koontz... What a friggin' amazing compliment... Thanks so much, Jaco.. read more
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I love your style
this is absolutely stunning
i am baffled
this chemistry of one's heart
making the world turn
and tumble

amazing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Amazing insight, Starz, and much appreciated... Thank you...
That flow of words is mind-blowing. Grace and strong vocabulary combined makes a wonderful piece, just like this!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

A graceful and mind-blowing review of your own, Rimpi... Thank you...
A masterpiece! For me, there is no other way to describe it. This poem is simply a masterpiece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

A masterpiece of appreciation, Flame, truly... Thank you...
A little flame

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome(:
This was so enjoyable to read through. The rhythm and word use awesome. I loved how it was almost a pause in the middle with "Blurred and slurred rhymes".

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

I love that pause as well, B.A... Thanks so much...

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Chase Dylan

Denver, CO



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