Snow Globe Letters

A blade of grass sits nestled in a nest of past tense blasts, like a fake cast of math, no numbers to craft. A fading lamp composed of satire and graffiti, graphical treaty. Magical seed in me growing quickly, speak to me like a puppet of greed. I'm bleeding sorrow, hiccups seeping through in-between each word, through with the news of old blues, a wolfs shoes and i'm through with the loose cannon syndrome hampering my kingdom. In my head it's a winged phenomenon. Sinning drones find me sitting alone. Still I stay sitting still, toned of mold of which to break me, i'm mold-less, like my lies; they flit between each vowel hungry and foully tied to me. Slowly folding my hand comes in the morning, after nine brutal hours of blank faces grating and blowing; amazing me with stories... Now a time when my rhymes ran as dry as my lines, sands of blight shifting in hand, my bland plight requires courage; a requiem of surging back-n-forth, stuck to mulching the ground of the awoke. Poke the soul of the broke and shattered, tattered forever in a snow globe of letters... 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Snow Globe Letters,
Dylan Chase,
I like your title. Words expressed in a musical flow swirling midst your globe. Nice.
It feels like a hip hop or other style as read. Also the feel of function of mind and
creativity in place of life which gets in the way or would even block the creative
process. The very chaos of live seems to actually bring forth more words. It
inspired.
Love discovering your writing once again.
Have been away off and on for a while.
It's nice to revisit.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Chase Dylan]

A most latest thank you, but thank you, Kathy.
Chaos does generate quite a lump sum of inspiration, eh.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful just love this style so free effortless writing luv luv luv !!!

[Chase Dylan]

A very, very late thank you, Julie. Luv luv luv the appreciation!

[Kittenincake]

"i'm through with the loose cannon syndrome hampering my kingdom." - love this line depicting self-destruction, truly a unique and thought out way to describe this. I've noticed alliteration enhances your writing. I would recommend using it more often. ("graffiti, graphical treaty," "sinning drones, sitting alone," "still I stay sitting still,") - would love to see if you could write a verse with only alliterations :) just for fun.

[Chase Dylan]

I am not the best at nailing "themes"... But I could always try... Thanks...

[CAPOLAVORO]

I love this one Silente. It's good to know that you already found your way of expressing thoughts in a poem where style is constant. Keep doing that rhythm. Keep writing. :)

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Miss Cap, means so much to me that you enjoyed it... I shall def' keep writing, you as well...

[Krutika]

I think you know I have been saying this countless times. But here I go again - how do you structure you posts so? They are like a spider Web.. No offense.. You know at first glance it seems complex but after a read or two one does a find a basic symmetry in it. So many ideas converging to make a single big entity. Your vocab! 👍

[Chase Dylan]

Hey, Krutika! Why ever would I take offense at such a wonderful compliment! Never apologize for having an opinion... Hah, "Flow landscape"... Is how I structure them in free-form, and I am glad you enjoyed it... Thanks!

[duff]

Man, I dig your work just because each time you take a journey. There's always that rhythm. Like the sounds of being a on train. A concert of imagery. This was neat and smooth. Awesome stuff

[Chase Dylan]

Always look forward to reading your stuff, and always enjoy seeing you enjoy mine... Thanks, budz... You always mention the rhythm... Try picking a random beat or instrumental to write to, just feel the emotions and go... If you wanted to, that is...

[duff]

I appreciate that man. For me it all starts with a beat. Without it I have no interest, lol.

[Chase Dylan]

Do you have any beats you prefer, or style of instrumental...?

[duff]

I've always been a fan of DJ Shadow and DJ Krush. Both are incredible. What about you?

[Chase Dylan]

I enjoy quite a smattering of hip hop producers and old sample songs, beats and all that jazz... I like both those DJ's, would be glad to share any music, as long as you return the favor! Haha

[duff]

Nice! We share similar interests then. Jurassic 5 is another one of my favorites. We can definitely do that!

[Chase Dylan]

Hell yeh, careful, I can be quite the avid music dispenser, haha....

[duff]

Lol, that's awesome

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.