Eerily

We all fall down as fall comes 'round

A ball of stalls...

I find myself appalling

The gall astounding...

A pale beauty rewinding

As seen in the treaty of heated fleetings...

It's feelings that seep through daily...

I'm barely flailing

Sagely craving greater achings...

Earnings worms and earrings

Whirlpools stacked in slap-stick churnings...

Let it go baby

Slurp it swirly early...

Eerily

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man ..smart, clever, dark, sarcastic irony ... so many relatable lines for me ..when i am down ... sigh! ;)
E.

[Chase Dylan]

Sigh, when we are down, the springs of relatable lines cast an iron spring around us... Heh, glad you enjoyed, and glad I could lighten the mood... Thank you

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Loved the wordplay in this one! The one thing I found while reading this was that it's as good reading from the start to the end as it is the other way round, or maybe even better ;)
eerily penned ;P :))

[Chase Dylan]

........................................................................... What... The.... Heck... I just read it backwards, and you are right... Holy... Apparently I have created a poem that goes both ways... No clue HOW you caught that... But good friggin' catch, haha...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

See, I am crazy hahah :p I read it the second time and it just clicked lol and that was brilliant ;) :) I've been trying to write something which goes both ways for a long time lol and still haven't succeeded :|

[Chase Dylan]

I am pretty sure you did... Cause I just commented on how you did... Aha

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Brett Hernan]

It's Autumn where I reside, a week until Winter begins and all of the deciduous trees are losing their leaves quickly now.
For me. you've accurately summed up and evoked the feeling of being a week away from winter.
Thank you.

[Chase Dylan]

Wow, Brett, a fantastic overlay of personal feeling evoked... Glad I could help... Thank you for opening my mind to the wonderful scene of changing season within the rhyme...

[Brett Hernan]

Thank you, Silente. if you were here I'm sure you'd see how 'eerily' fits so very well.

[Weeping willow]

Love the flow of words as they intertwine and mix into rhymes;-]

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, WW...

[Raven Moonchild]

(applauds) Brilliant,deep,imaginative. :) I love it!!!

[Chase Dylan]

*Bows*... Thanks so much, RM...

[Richard McLin]

Another win, this is a great piece. Plus "Slurp it swirly early" maybe one of the best things ever written. Great job.

-Richard

[Chase Dylan]

You spoil me, Richard... Thanks so much... I do not about best thing ever, though, hahaha...

[Richard McLin]

Oh trust me, it's right up there.

[Sinbulvinter]

I love the meaning behind this and the rhymes are awesome like always. Such unqiue flair in all your pieces! Love it!

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks for the unique and flair-ish review, SinV... I appreciate it