Aftertaste (Collab' with Kesha)

So the day ended like any other

Never mattered the gray-matter spatter of brains...

Except his face was saved

 After lame-brained fools who poke and school others for muttering...

In a jar where he would rest forever

 I'm stuttering and fumbling with centipedes...

I carved 'n' carved

 cents 'n' disease...

His skin from end-to-end

 I'm free from seeds of bleeding creeds...

He never did seem to care

 Weep and heed it...

 creeping sieve of slithering seepage...

It was a forbidden love affair 

 The calling of the lambs...

 Blame and cram his dead-beat heart(s)...

Thoughts chopped-up...

 Skunk-smellin' block of get-set-mark the slop-point...

 Slam the choke-moist till it drips buoyantly...

Might I mention Holy-He

 The creature eaten for seeing no other shade but featured in bladed gray...

No real affection played...

Just slayed and chewed-up...

I always knew he'd end-up...

with his head on my shelf

Dried-up aftertaste...?

Fae-wealth

Author's Note

Kesha and I's collab'... Hope you enjoy...!

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

OMG! Silente & Kesha slay the day! Powerful & profound statement on mindless intolerance & violence in the streets- "Never mattered the grey-matter spatter of brains."-Whaaaa??!! "Skunk-smellin' block of get-set mark the slop point"-lambs to the slaughter. " Rhythmic, gun-shot symphony."Weep & heed it"-the bloody epitaph. Kudos- Master Class!

[Chase Dylan]

OH MEH GOSH... The cemented style of Kesha, combined with my splatter of mad-hatter... Left this certainly in a class of master-sass... Thanks so much for the fun review, Annette...

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Thank you to both of you for the read & ride!!:))

[Kesha]

Haha thank you for such a lovely review!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like this poem.
"No real affection played...
Just slayed and chewed-up...
I always knew he'd end-up...
with his head on my shelf
Dried-up aftertaste...?"
The above lines. So damn good. Slayed and chew-up. Nice use of words and thoughts in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kesha]

Thank you very much, always nice hearing from you!! :)

[Chase Dylan]

I really did like your review, Coyote, is a treasure to hear from such an inspired writer, such a yourself... Thank you...

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure. A outstanding effort of two writers. You are welcome.

[Richard McLin]

Damn good colab. This is a great piece that I read through multiple times. Great work from both of you.

-Richard

[Chase Dylan]

Damn, glad you liked it, Richard... always a pleasure to hear from such a talented writer... Thank you muchly

[Kesha]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it so much!

[Richard McLin]

Your both very welcome.

[Bear]

I have said this before any time two writers can come together on a collaboration I have to applaud their efforts. To write with another is not an easy thing to do, conflicts on plot, characters and events have to be over come. The human ego is the biggest obstacle to over come but the two of you have overcome it all to create this work of literature. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Chase Dylan]

I am warmed that you appreciate the effort so much, Bear... I agree wholeheartedly... Anytime two people can drop the ego and work together seamlessly... Tis a rare and wonderful experience, indeed... Thanks for the drop-in...!

[Bear]

Well Kesha sent me a read request and I felt it only fair that what I posted with her copy should also be posted with your copy :~)

[Chase Dylan]

You are far 2 sweet... If only everyone extended the same courtesies you do... Cheers'

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

All in all this is the best man.... I really like it

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Earth... Please remember that Yumna worked hard on leaving a unique review on Keshas post... It is very disrespectful to just copy/paste others words as your own... I would suggest apologizing to her... Regardless, thanks again...

[Priyanshi]

An amazing collab. of you both....loved it....I would like to see next poem of your collab....great work, Silente and Kesha.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Priyanshi... Was an amazing experience... I would love to see that as well...! Hah

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Silente.

[h d e rushin]

the things we love the most, hate us the least. So we really never get ahead in abundancy. Pain is what happens to your fingers after you build a dumb a*s wall to keep out the aliens of heart break and loss..

great ideas....dana

[Chase Dylan]

Haha, seriously H.D.E-Rushin'... So darn classy, then the alien side comes out... You make me smile so big every time I read your reviews... Hands-down my favorite things to ingest on this site... Even greater expression of respect, Dana...
Silente

[Decidious wind]

The thing that i love about your writing is how complicated it is! I could spend hours on it and come up with 10 or more interpretations.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Decidious Wind... That is actually a very blush-worthy compliment... I strive for not much else but to grow paths for abstract interpretation...

[Mr.Writer]

Really gory, violent but amazing and engaging at the same time!!!
This collab is really fantastic and cheesy guys...
The flow and the way it's written is very good!
Keep it up Silente and Kesha :)