Aftertaste (Collab' with Kesha)

Aftertaste (Collab' with Kesha)

A Poem by Silente
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Get set...

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So the day ended like any other
Never mattered the gray-matter spatter of brains...
Except his face was saved
 After lame-brained fools who poke and school others for muttering...
In a jar where he would rest forever
 I'm stuttering and fumbling with centipedes...
I carved 'n' carved
 cents 'n' disease...
His skin from end-to-end
 I'm free from seeds of bleeding creeds...
He never did seem to care
 Weep and heed it...
 creeping sieve of slithering seepage...
It was a forbidden love affair 
 The calling of the lambs...
 Blame and cram his dead-beat heart(s)...
Thoughts chopped-up...
 Skunk-smellin' block of get-set-mark the slop-point...
 Slam the choke-moist till it drips buoyantly...
Might I mention Holy-He
 The creature eaten for seeing no other shade but featured in bladed gray...
No real affection played...
Just slayed and chewed-up...
I always knew he'd end-up...
with his head on my shelf

Dried-up aftertaste...?

Fae-wealth


© 2017 Silente



Author's Note

Silente
Kesha and I's collab'... Hope you enjoy...!

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OMG! Silente & Kesha slay the day! Powerful & profound statement on mindless intolerance & violence in the streets- "Never mattered the grey-matter spatter of brains."-Whaaaa??!! "Skunk-smellin' block of get-set mark the slop point"-lambs to the slaughter. " Rhythmic, gun-shot symphony."Weep & heed it"-the bloody epitaph. Kudos- Master Class!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

OH MEH GOSH... The cemented style of Kesha, combined with my splatter of mad-hatter... Left this cer.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

4 Months Ago

Thank you to both of you for the read & ride!!:))
Kesha

4 Months Ago

Haha thank you for such a lovely review!!



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I did like this poem.
"No real affection played...
Just slayed and chewed-up...
I always knew he'd end-up...
with his head on my shelf
Dried-up aftertaste...?"
The above lines. So damn good. Slayed and chew-up. Nice use of words and thoughts in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much, always nice hearing from you!! :)
Silente

4 Months Ago

I really did like your review, Coyote, is a treasure to hear from such an inspired writer, such a yo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Was my pleasure. A outstanding effort of two writers. You are welcome.
Damn good colab. This is a great piece that I read through multiple times. Great work from both of you.

-Richard

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Damn, glad you liked it, Richard... always a pleasure to hear from such a talented writer... Thank y.. read more
Kesha

4 Months Ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it so much!
Richard McLin

4 Months Ago

Your both very welcome.
I have said this before any time two writers can come together on a collaboration I have to applaud their efforts. To write with another is not an easy thing to do, conflicts on plot, characters and events have to be over come. The human ego is the biggest obstacle to over come but the two of you have overcome it all to create this work of literature. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

I am warmed that you appreciate the effort so much, Bear... I agree wholeheartedly... Anytime two pe.. read more
Bear

4 Months Ago

Well Kesha sent me a read request and I felt it only fair that what I posted with her copy should al.. read more
Silente

4 Months Ago

You are far 2 sweet... If only everyone extended the same courtesies you do... Cheers'
All in all this is the best man.... I really like it

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Earth... Please remember that Yumna worked hard on leaving a unique review on Keshas post.. read more
OMG! Silente & Kesha slay the day! Powerful & profound statement on mindless intolerance & violence in the streets- "Never mattered the grey-matter spatter of brains."-Whaaaa??!! "Skunk-smellin' block of get-set mark the slop point"-lambs to the slaughter. " Rhythmic, gun-shot symphony."Weep & heed it"-the bloody epitaph. Kudos- Master Class!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

OH MEH GOSH... The cemented style of Kesha, combined with my splatter of mad-hatter... Left this cer.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

4 Months Ago

Thank you to both of you for the read & ride!!:))
Kesha

4 Months Ago

Haha thank you for such a lovely review!!
An amazing collab. of you both....loved it....I would like to see next poem of your collab....great work, Silente and Kesha.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Thanks, Priyanshi... Was an amazing experience... I would love to see that as well...! Hah
Priyanshi

4 Months Ago

My pleasure, Silente.
the things we love the most, hate us the least. So we really never get ahead in abundancy. Pain is what happens to your fingers after you build a dumb a*s wall to keep out the aliens of heart break and loss..

great ideas....dana

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Haha, seriously H.D.E-Rushin'... So darn classy, then the alien side comes out... You make me smile .. read more
The thing that i love about your writing is how complicated it is! I could spend hours on it and come up with 10 or more interpretations.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Thanks, Decidious Wind... That is actually a very blush-worthy compliment... I strive for not much e.. read more
Really gory, violent but amazing and engaging at the same time!!!
This collab is really fantastic and cheesy guys...
The flow and the way it's written is very good!
Keep it up Silente and Kesha :)


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 1, 2017
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