Questionably Questioned...

Questionably questioned by the quest-givers

I'm a chest-earner

and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...

I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...

No warlock circle to burn on my skin

I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...

I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe

Blows and throes...

I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...

A zoid, I am moist...

Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...

Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light

this time I'm "ite"...

Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...

Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...

Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...

Whole toll is folded...

A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket

I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...

Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...

Needing grit...?

 Oh, you wish...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Carol Cashes]

"I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips..." That describes me since I've joined this site and learning to not just read poetry but really understand it. I have the proper appreciation for uniquely descriptive phrases, I try to use them myself. "Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..." beautiful imagery. All your stuff has vivid imagery and I always recognize and acknowledge that. This, like your others, reads smoothly, rhyming in odd but not wrong places...hey! It's poetry! I get it...(see? I'm learning). Good read. See you in class tomorrow?

[Chase Dylan]

Wow, Carol... Thank you so very much for this insight... Hey, you get it, haha... Glad to be such a help with poetry... I am ALWAYS ready for rhyming class...!

[Hebe]

You certainly went on one heck of a discovery adventure ..... makes an impact! Amazing.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks very much, Heben, your words make an impact....

[pia]

gosh Doolin your poems are just crazy good !!! there was just so much going on here it was exciting !! i loved it even though the brain dead me has no idea of the theme behind this i just loved the words and rhymes !!!

[Chase Dylan]

D'aw, thank you, Pie... You are absolutely not brain-dead... You probably have a clearer vision of what this means than I do...! Abstract is abstract, does not mean you lack intelligence for not being able to write a thesis on it, aha...

[Raven Moonchild]

Words can't properly describe how deep, amazing, and imaginative this is. :) This will definitely make one check under their bed twice at night. lol

[Chase Dylan]

Hah, and my day is complete upon hearing such a fantastic compliment... Thanks, Raven...

[Raven Moonchild]

And thank you again for sharing your amazing work. :)

[Chase Dylan]

And thank you again, for thanking me again, hah...

[Priyanshi]

Hey....a powerful write, I must say...I need to learn many things from you.....great work, Silente.

[Chase Dylan]

I appreciate that, Priyanshi... Learn away, aha...

[Priyanshi]

Thanks, I shall.

[emipoemi]

This is a fun bit of doggerel and nonsense, full of assonance and internal rhymes every few syllables. It could do with a couple of more line breaks here and there so ease up on the breaths taken in between thoughts, which at times could go a couple of long lines at a time, and faith! not many people can hold their breath for that long! But that doesn't hurt the fact that this is amazingly written, and the nonsensical word/sound play simply elicits a giggle. Fantastic!

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Emi... Means a lot to hear... I usually break things up more, was feeling some longer lines this time... But I absolutely know what you mean, and thanks again for the insight...!

[emipoemi]

always happy to help.

[Mr.Writer]

Wippeee! I'm on a roller coaster! *cough cough, a poem...* :D
Wow, the fast paced feeling and those special rhymes you've used Silente really have a big impact on the poem!
Well done, keep it up!

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Mr. Writer, lol... I would say wow, another roller coaster comment, but I somehow sense a tinge of sarcasm in this one, hahaha...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, no problem Silente!
I'm not being sarcastic at all tbh :D

[Chase Dylan]

Lol, then that is a true skill... Your sarcasm is so advanced... You do not even have to try... Hahaha

[Mr.Writer]

Oh umm, haha :D

[Zoya]

Ahhh, this is all mumbo-jumbo...though I really don't get what you write (id be pleased to know the person who actually does understand it) the flow and tempo of the piece binds the reader till the very end...You use some heavy words and sentences, and of course they have a huge impact on the readers.
"A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket" - loved this line.
Insanely penned! Lol

[Chase Dylan]

Well... You know ONE person, at least... ME...!!! haha... Thanks very much, Zoe... You nearly caught my favorite line, as well... Insanely reviewed....!

[Zoya]

Oh, so you do get it? xD that's good to know lol. You're welcome!

[Jes' Pi]

Powerful. I like it........

[Chase Dylan]

An even more powerful drop in from the nobility of simplicity... Thanks very much, Pi...

[Zephyr]

A kingly read silente. I esp liked the beginning. Thanks for sharing:-)

[Chase Dylan]

A queenly review, Neetha... Thank you

[Zephyr]

My pleasure