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"Understanding"

"Understanding"

A Poem by Silente
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Laughing... Crying...

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Was I ever anything other than a row boat of understanding...
Was the load a toad that couldn't carry the weight of our laughing...
Might as well be cashed-out and standing in the rain
cause you feel no pain when trading me in for gains...
I'm alone and in vain I seek growth with a cane and rope
hope my choke can be caught before it hits the moat...
Rote slop of gropes in the dark
where was I when the mark missed its lark...
I'm hearkened to flop...
So start to stab me every which-way...
I'm heading for memory lane and it's a lame avenue of grain-free
now free but am a seed for the thousands of leeches infecting peaches... 
Molesting creatures...
Electing reavers...
So quiver and see this
hear wit betrayed
leap of faith
marmalade-aid and sated breath today...
Baked blaze and graze...
Now red-in-the-face I take a taste of fae-waste
 that pale-place when aced of graceless lace I hasten traces of pages placed... 
Intent I create craters in a maze of traitors
that bladed saber hater...
I hate her,
and savor another suitor forever suited for her labors   
Later, Gator...

© 2017 Silente



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mou
probably it's my first visit to your page..I can not decide how to express my thought with words over your writing..I take a repetitive reading on your write and more it becomes like a crawling picture of someone's thought..I wish I too can write like this!! profound write..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Mou, and you seemed to decide on a beautiful expression in the end... Anyone can write li.. read more



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This is very nicely written. thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Silente

3 Weeks Ago

Mhm, thank you
Love this
So unique so different
So inspiring

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Silente

2 Months Ago

glad to inspire, thanks
Very very amazing simple and conjectured

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Silente

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Hari
Reminded me of Andronicus with Understanding, laughing and crying.
At the end of the day nobody understands perfectly as well as well do deep down.
Another great write from you.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Poet face, I read the poem you mentioned... Was good stuff
I like how it started as smooth and soft and ended hard and dark. You talk about relationships in life and in people a good transcending way in a whole new spectrum of joy and darkness as well as hard upfront. Do continue to bridge a gap through your poetry.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Cap! I shall try
It seems that You understand all whom are around You but no one around You do the same for You, or at least pay attention to what You say or do, like they only take advantages from You without caring about what You want, it left You to be hurt and angry, feeling betrayed, and yes You hate betrayal.
Sometime You wish You can stop growing inside and keep Your being just "understanding", at some time You need to stop so others can catch up to You and You won't feel lonely again.
I hope I'm mistaken here, but this is what I got from Your words here.

Warmest Blessings*


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

You have RIDICULOUSLY on-point insight, I swear... Your words mean much, again, and thank you so muc.. read more
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Light

3 Months Ago

I will try and use this ridiculously on-point insight into useful things the best I can :)
I liked this poem my friend.
"Molesting creatures...
Electing reavers...
So quiver and see this
hear wit betrayed
leap of faith
marmalade-aid and sated breath today...
Baked blaze and graze..."
The above lines. Outstanding. I had to read the poem again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome, Coyote, but more thank you's to you, for reading and enjoying
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I did enjoy my friend.
I know that every time i stop by i'm in for a treat! And oh man, this is just something else, marmalaid - aid, a seed for the thousands of leeches infecting peaches....quite breathtaking dear author. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Thanks so much, dear reader, and...
Oh wait...
It is the person who's poetry showed .. read more
Ana B.

3 Months Ago

haha, you're too generous :) Thank you and btw, i'm almost becoming a fan of your work. Amazing stuf.. read more
Silente

3 Months Ago

Haha... "Almost"? I will take it, thanks again, Ana
Brilliant..... The way u narrate, that's impressive.... I Enjoyed...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Thanks Miss Sandy... A brilliant review, and one I enjoyed, appreciate it so much!
Silente,my Man You are brilliant. I love the narative style in delivery, the imagery that knocks on one thoughts and the wit and cleverness in the story told. Most impressive!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

4 Months Ago

550 reviews says it all. lol. I never make that grade lol Well done Well accomplished.
Silente

3 Months Ago

Oh, wow, Andrew... Well you are making me blush, shesh... Thank you so much... Well... It is 500+ pl.. read more

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