Emulating Stars of Maybe

Emulating stars of maybe in May, hey baby, ray stuns and gravy

I'm alive and unfettered bravely

I'm better than wetter dogs with rabies, a slave to crazy, still jive and raving

Dime shot on sight, creeping hog tied up tight, and I'm slightly light in the pockets

Mark-it and hearken, steady ready caulk-it

Off-it like rockets I'm parkin' and stalkin' on foot at the market

I stray when I pursue loose grooves with my pick...

No-stop-it

Can't slick-pin her, hoppin' to the sloppin', and next target is barkin'

I'm farther than a garden guarded by sovereign guardians pawin' 'n' slobberin' 

Lower than drains clogged with pain runnin' on sugar-bane

Can it tame the blame that I swing wildly like a cane

Like a similie for lame, I'm lamer than lame

Now steady aim and pray we can coast today, mope and sway

Lay to rest grace, but sashay when slain

Sass and flame?

Hah...

Might as well use our brains.

Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow

Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes

The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose

The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark

I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets

Now the pavement calls me, need a beat-back symphony to make it...

No problem

You lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'

Just remember...

No sobbin' 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes"

A country girl feeling to this with pizzazz and toughness to her. Take no prisoners kind of attitude, enjoy while you can or lose it all. The star is flashing bright upon the slopes so walk in its brightness or stay in the shadows. Excellent and with a great vibe...:).............

[Silente]

I am glad you enjoyed, Sami, and thank you so very much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...:::))))

[Richard McLin]

Love the line about being better than wet dogs with rabies.

This is a great piece. another one that just proves what a poetry force you are. I love writing poetry, and a few of my pieces are some of the best things I've written, but I can't force it, and it can be tricky to come up with new poems. Reading your work is truly inspiring. Thank you for that. Great job.
-Richard

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Could be a rapping along with it
as one reads it.
Nice structure that is appealing to the eye.

[Silente]

Thank you, Josie, rapping along is the best! Heh

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

you're welcome!
:)

[Cecelia A. Green]

"Sass and flame?
Hah...
Might as well use our brains."

ICONIC

[Silente]

I tend to agree... I enjoyed writing that

[duff]

The creative flow is strong with this one. You seem to have an arsenal of rhymes on standby. Your wit and ability to captivate readers with clever ideas is quite amazing. I've always been a fan of your stuff man. Great work.

[Silente]

Thank you, Duff, hope all is well with you, my friend...

[duff]

Anytime man. My pleasure. I'm doing great at the moment and I hope you are as well.

[Silente]

Busy, but good. Am very happy to hear you are kicking a*s...

[icecream]

Have you ever put this to music.
It's kinda lyrical
Thanks for sharing

[Silente]

Absolutely, that would explain my absences... As most of what I write is for my own musical expression... I just chop stuff up and throw it on here when I am bored...

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

The richness of this Rap is blinding, winding, grinding..."better than wetter dogs with rabies"-yes! Tumbling, rumbling through this like bob-sled, the brilliant musicality of beat, meter, rhyme , flow impetus, relevance, artistically blows me away.."you lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'- DEAL! Master-class work friend Silente Excellente!

[Silente]

Another winding and grinding type review... You take my breath away with appreciation powerz, lol... Thanks again

[barleygirl]

As sometimes happens with your heaviest rap-like rhyming frenzies, I don't get most of this, but it's still fun to read -- your word-association is brilliant & unlike any I've read.

[Silente]

What a heavy compliment, as I am sure you have read a good bit, heh
Thank you

[MaximumFlight]

Wonderful job, this piece kinda makes me sad, but I enjoyed it none the less.

[Silente]

Thanks, Maximum

[A little flame]

How high are you? Jk Jk
A bit more romantic than your usual vibe. I like it!

[Silente]

Thank you, Flame, and always at least a little high, hahaha

[DarkMist]

this is amazing!! the poem reads like a song,and the wordplay is quite excellent. Loved it
"The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose
The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark
I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets"
my favorite lines

[Silente]

I really was back "n" forth on that carpet line for a minute or two... Very glad someone liked it as much as I did... Thanks so much, Mist

[DarkMist]

you're welcome