Emulating Stars of Maybe

Emulating Stars of Maybe

A Poem by Silente
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Ray-stuns and gravy...

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Emulating stars of maybe in May, hey baby, ray stuns and gravy
I'm alive and unfettered bravely
I'm better than wetter dogs with rabies, a slave to crazy, still jive and raving
Dime shot on sight, creeping hog tied up tight, and I'm slightly light in the pockets
Mark-it and hearken, steady ready caulk-it
Off-it like rockets I'm parkin' and stalkin' on foot at the market
I stray when I pursue loose grooves with my pick...
No-stop-it
Can't slick-pin her, hoppin' to the sloppin', and next target is barkin'
I'm farther than a garden guarded by sovereign guardians pawin' 'n' slobberin' 
Lower than drains clogged with pain runnin' on sugar-bane
Can it tame the blame that I swing wildly like a cane
Like a similie for lame, I'm lamer than lame
Now steady aim and pray we can coast today, mope and sway
Lay to rest grace, but sashay when slain
Sass and flame?
Hah...
Might as well use our brains.
Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes
The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose
The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark
I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets
Now the pavement calls me, need a beat-back symphony to make it...
No problem
You lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'
Just remember...
No sobbin' 


© 2017 Silente



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"something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes"

A country girl feeling to this with pizzazz and toughness to her. Take no prisoners kind of attitude, enjoy while you can or lose it all. The star is flashing bright upon the slopes so walk in its brightness or stay in the shadows. Excellent and with a great vibe...:).............

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

I am glad you enjoyed, Sami, and thank you so very much
Sami Khalil

4 Months Ago

You are welcome. ...:::))))



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Could be a rapping along with it
as one reads it.
Nice structure that is appealing to the eye.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Josie, rapping along is the best! Heh
Josie E. Cook M. A.

2 Months Ago

you're welcome!
:)
"Sass and flame?
Hah...
Might as well use our brains."

ICONIC

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

I tend to agree... I enjoyed writing that
The creative flow is strong with this one. You seem to have an arsenal of rhymes on standby. Your wit and ability to captivate readers with clever ideas is quite amazing. I've always been a fan of your stuff man. Great work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Duff, hope all is well with you, my friend...
method

2 Months Ago

Anytime man. My pleasure. I'm doing great at the moment and I hope you are as well.
Silente

2 Months Ago

Busy, but good. Am very happy to hear you are kicking a*s...
Have you ever put this to music.
It's kinda lyrical
Thanks for sharing

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Absolutely, that would explain my absences... As most of what I write is for my own musical expressi.. read more
The richness of this Rap is blinding, winding, grinding..."better than wetter dogs with rabies"-yes! Tumbling, rumbling through this like bob-sled, the brilliant musicality of beat, meter, rhyme , flow impetus, relevance, artistically blows me away.."you lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'- DEAL! Master-class work friend Silente Excellente!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Another winding and grinding type review... You take my breath away with appreciation powerz, lol..... read more
As sometimes happens with your heaviest rap-like rhyming frenzies, I don't get most of this, but it's still fun to read -- your word-association is brilliant & unlike any I've read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

What a heavy compliment, as I am sure you have read a good bit, heh
Thank you
Wonderful job, this piece kinda makes me sad, but I enjoyed it none the less.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Thanks, Maximum
How high are you? Jk Jk
A bit more romantic than your usual vibe. I like it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Flame, and always at least a little high, hahaha
this is amazing!! the poem reads like a song,and the wordplay is quite excellent. Loved it
"The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose
The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark
I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets"
my favorite lines

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

I really was back "n" forth on that carpet line for a minute or two... Very glad someone liked it as.. read more
DarkMist

3 Months Ago

you're welcome
Wow! Rhythmic, and good use of imagery. You could almost set that to music!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

That is always the point, so great to hear, thank you, Steph

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