"something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes"
A country girl feeling to this with pizzazz and toughness to her. Take no prisoners kind of attitude, enjoy while you can or lose it all. The star is flashing bright upon the slopes so walk in its brightness or stay in the shadows. Excellent and with a great vibe...:).............
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
I am glad you enjoyed, Sami, and thank you so very much
Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?
Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.
And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)
If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.
Regards,
-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...
(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)
Love the line about being better than wet dogs with rabies.
This is a great piece. another one that just proves what a poetry force you are. I love writing poetry, and a few of my pieces are some of the best things I've written, but I can't force it, and it can be tricky to come up with new poems. Reading your work is truly inspiring. Thank you for that. Great job.
-Richard
The creative flow is strong with this one. You seem to have an arsenal of rhymes on standby. Your wit and ability to captivate readers with clever ideas is quite amazing. I've always been a fan of your stuff man. Great work.
Have you ever put this to music.
It's kinda lyrical
Thanks for sharing
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Absolutely, that would explain my absences... As most of what I write is for my own musical expressi.. read moreAbsolutely, that would explain my absences... As most of what I write is for my own musical expression... I just chop stuff up and throw it on here when I am bored...
The richness of this Rap is blinding, winding, grinding..."better than wetter dogs with rabies"-yes! Tumbling, rumbling through this like bob-sled, the brilliant musicality of beat, meter, rhyme , flow impetus, relevance, artistically blows me away.."you lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'- DEAL! Master-class work friend Silente Excellente!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Another winding and grinding type review... You take my breath away with appreciation powerz, lol..... read moreAnother winding and grinding type review... You take my breath away with appreciation powerz, lol... Thanks again
As sometimes happens with your heaviest rap-like rhyming frenzies, I don't get most of this, but it's still fun to read -- your word-association is brilliant & unlike any I've read.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
What a heavy compliment, as I am sure you have read a good bit, heh
Thank you
6 Months Ago
Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read moreGee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?
Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.
And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)
If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.
Regards,
-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...
(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)
When you have no words...
Go find them!
They get lost easily...
(Seriously)
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