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Emulating Stars of Maybe

Emulating Stars of Maybe

A Poem by Silente
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Ray-stuns and gravy...

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Emulating stars of maybe in May, hey baby, ray stuns and gravy
I'm alive and unfettered bravely
I'm better than wetter dogs with rabies, a slave to crazy, still jive and raving
Dime shot on sight, creeping hog tied up tight, and I'm slightly light in the pockets
Mark-it and hearken, steady ready caulk-it
Off-it like rockets I'm parkin' and stalkin' on foot at the market
I stray when I pursue loose grooves with my pick...
No-stop-it
Can't slick-pin her, hoppin' to the sloppin', and next target is barkin'
I'm farther than a garden guarded by sovereign guardians pawin' 'n' slobberin' 
Lower than drains clogged with pain runnin' on sugar-bane
Can it tame the blame that I swing wildly like a cane
Like a similie for lame, I'm lamer than lame
Now steady aim and pray we can coast today, mope and sway
Lay to rest grace, but sashay when slain
Sass and flame?
Hah...
Might as well use our brains.
Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes
The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose
The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark
I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets
Now the pavement calls me, need a beat-back symphony to make it...
No problem
You lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'
Just remember...
No sobbin' 


© 2017 Silente



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"something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes"

A country girl feeling to this with pizzazz and toughness to her. Take no prisoners kind of attitude, enjoy while you can or lose it all. The star is flashing bright upon the slopes so walk in its brightness or stay in the shadows. Excellent and with a great vibe...:).............

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

I am glad you enjoyed, Sami, and thank you so very much
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. ...:::))))



Reviews

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

Posted 1 Day Ago


Love the line about being better than wet dogs with rabies.

This is a great piece. another one that just proves what a poetry force you are. I love writing poetry, and a few of my pieces are some of the best things I've written, but I can't force it, and it can be tricky to come up with new poems. Reading your work is truly inspiring. Thank you for that. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 6 Months Ago


Could be a rapping along with it
as one reads it.
Nice structure that is appealing to the eye.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Josie, rapping along is the best! Heh
Josie E. Cook M. A.

11 Months Ago

you're welcome!
:)
"Sass and flame?
Hah...
Might as well use our brains."

ICONIC

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

I tend to agree... I enjoyed writing that
The creative flow is strong with this one. You seem to have an arsenal of rhymes on standby. Your wit and ability to captivate readers with clever ideas is quite amazing. I've always been a fan of your stuff man. Great work.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Duff, hope all is well with you, my friend...
duff

11 Months Ago

Anytime man. My pleasure. I'm doing great at the moment and I hope you are as well.
Silente

11 Months Ago

Busy, but good. Am very happy to hear you are kicking a*s...
Have you ever put this to music.
It's kinda lyrical
Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

12 Months Ago

Absolutely, that would explain my absences... As most of what I write is for my own musical expressi.. read more
The richness of this Rap is blinding, winding, grinding..."better than wetter dogs with rabies"-yes! Tumbling, rumbling through this like bob-sled, the brilliant musicality of beat, meter, rhyme , flow impetus, relevance, artistically blows me away.."you lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'- DEAL! Master-class work friend Silente Excellente!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Another winding and grinding type review... You take my breath away with appreciation powerz, lol..... read more
As sometimes happens with your heaviest rap-like rhyming frenzies, I don't get most of this, but it's still fun to read -- your word-association is brilliant & unlike any I've read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

What a heavy compliment, as I am sure you have read a good bit, heh
Thank you
RolandDee

1 Day Ago

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read more
Wonderful job, this piece kinda makes me sad, but I enjoyed it none the less.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Thanks, Maximum
How high are you? Jk Jk
A bit more romantic than your usual vibe. I like it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Flame, and always at least a little high, hahaha

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Silente

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