Sacred Vapors

I'm untamed

Insane brain lame-reined in to fillet saber-lain drains

In labor I gain ravens braver than slavers able to savor gall-breaker takers

if you're in favor lets rape-her and traverse papers for diverse capers

I'm tapered

a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers

on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors

Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations

Fulmination of generations slated in gray

Painted on a submarine stage

a rage in a cage set like a face-plant

I'm like Abraham and freed the slaves of verbal-trends

I'm global-sent and vorpal-bent

but low-rent keeps me lent to the lamb

I'm slammed and lambasted

ran outta RAM by a ram slipperier than grand

By ghosts boasted most toast by the roastiest roach

I puff a roach 

roast a goat

loads of moats rowed alone

Host is over-grown

sober toned loans and blown-out foam

roam ah-doam and sloped groans

I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts

No tone

Author's Note

Umm... Stuff...

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

You're back in the groove, my friend! My favourite lines in this one are:
"a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage".
Keep 'em coming!

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Horseman, it is much appreciated

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome, Silente.

[Jon Roggie]

Reading chaos, while seeing a pattern.
Enjoying the play. Forms don't have to be followed.
Words find their way.

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, thank you, Jon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

good diversions from the way it is...cynical, nicely depicting how we are raping the land...raping democracy---pilfering freedom from those who come to this country seeking a better life...

the moats keep bad guys out of the castle, in the old days...we have that again...but not really bad guys....just people...The King Rules...we're all fired.

j.

[Chase Dylan]

Appreciated, thanks, J

[MaximumFlight]

Absolutely beautiful. Wonderful job :)

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you.

[Ana B.]

I'll quote the Raven Moonchild here and will also say that when i grow up (says the 25 year old) i wanna be even half as good...i mean seriously, your stuff is like a big bang for my brain :)

[Chase Dylan]

You are one year off, buddy, heh... Thanks

[Raven Moonchild]

I hope when I grow up (said the 22 year old) that my poetry gets to be amazing as this, man. I mean it. The depth you put into your work is spine rattling and mind boggling!!! :D ROCK ON, HEAVY METAL BRO!!!! (throws horns in salute)

[Chase Dylan]

Heh, well... I am only 26, so... Growing up can not be very far off for yeh... Thanks, Raven

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah...claps!
wonderful work...

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Waj