Alaskan Savage

Lemons and elephants...

Manic erratic combative out ah-it element flippin' it rippin' it gettin' it zippin' it dippin' it imminent intricate immigrant

 Now I be sippin' it cinnamon dividend evidence elephants skimmin' it grippin' it ribbons and lemons of heavens

I'm sentient definite devilish effortless semblance of betterment

Gotta be synonyms 

Cinema sinnin' a kitten a mitten a bitter December remember avenger develop ah-leverage

A passage gadget

Passive habit

Rabid aladdin' grabbin' magic rapid' askin' for Alaskan ravage a savage maskin' gaspin' like passion baskin'

A basket is wrappin' for havoc unlashin' rations bashin' taverns

Follow the lanterns

Hollow on Saturn...

The rings are vapor craters that are tapered for able-daters

 I'm a saber ravin' a raven raidin' a labor haven

Craven vampire cravin' a safer empire

An umpire says safe pavement but its fake diamond 

The rough slimin' abidin' hidin' tridents violent

Try to dent a silent rhyme-in half a second

It's past eleven I'm bidin' my second second chance countin' islands as they pass 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such an interesting piece...has such movement in it's beat, and being more about not moving, being apathetic....letting things just happen----we stand too idle these days, i believe...we need more voices to be raised in defiance of what we have become as a society....
nicely done here.
powerful.
j.

[Chase Dylan]

Coming from you, Sir Jacob, tis a compliment of the highest accord... You are still one of the best writers on here, thank you, sincerely...

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

How very expressive. And beautiful. I say that in every review, don't I? Heh heh.

The last lines were my personal favourite. The most wonderful way to end a wonderful poem.

Love,
Vasilees.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Vas, and I think we all say the same stuffz at some point... Who cares, as long as you genuinely liked it, nothing else matters!

[Katy]

You write amazing! I love reading your works

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Katy, I love reading that people love reading, hah

[Sami Khalil]

Very expressive and enjoyable using different techniques and slang mixed with Alaskan wilderness. Thank you for sharing. Kudos.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Sami, I appreciate the expression of encouragement

[Sami Khalil]

You are very welcome, Silente.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

nice work of expressions thanks for sharing.

[Chase Dylan]

Expression is, as expression does... Heh, thank you muchly, Roxane

[Jiya]

Your use of expressions is commendable. Wish I could rhyme like you.
Keep writing!

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you very much, Jiya... You CAN rhyme like I do, just takes some practice...! I will keep writing, you as well...!