Syllabus Re-Engaged

Syllabus Re-Engaged

A Poem by Silente
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An angel with no wings...

"
Yeah I see that syllabus re-engaged
now I drift through space an angel with no wings
An angler with no angle to catch dreams
I see screams desecrate reams of paper on the floor
I gasp
carve myself out an inch of porn to sleep soundly by the boards of four
It's floorboards or scores of scones some might call w****s
I don't implore nor goad the lord when searching for toads under stools
but still my sword is proof toadstools can fool
Shall I rule?
hand out gruel...
It's cruel, I know
to be misused, but truth be soon on the heels of lollipop ruse
Rust evolves like holograms blue
I sound out every syllable proof, so they can find me with helium loops 
Ionic iconic sonic like spill-proof hydroponics, hydraulics engage
It's hyper-soluble double solvable embolics
gullible solvent a salvo of embellished linguistics
All or nothing-north star facing holistic bumbling
a bee sting 'n' I'm fumbling for ballistic crumbling
As cityscapes scrape on vape clouds waked
I sense baste as the paste of filthy high-brows quake

© 2017 Silente



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This ones one of my favorites from this site so far, thats probably because ima big fan of space and cityscape imagery, and the meter is nice

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Ahh, well thank you so much, Jack... I love space and city imagery as well... Anything that is relat.. read more
Are you a science wiz . I cant stop flattering you . But mind it . This is honest flattery . Loved it . Loved it .

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Silente

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much. Ragbhib... I am not a science wiz, just love lots of words, heh
"An angler with no angle to catch dreams"
Stunning writing. Damn. A line to stop you in your tracks.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Thanks, bud
I like the way this bounces around, taking swipes left and right, conjuring absurd images and creating collages of sound. And the toadstools section made me laugh out loud! Good stuff, my friend.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Horsey man
The Iron Horseman

1 Month Ago

You are most welcome, my friend.
This little ditty of yours is showing a lot more tricks than just your love of rhyming . . . I'm enjoying your wordplay with vowels sounds & many of your phrases are cleverly crafted: "an angler with no angle" . . . "searching for toads under stools" . . . "spill-proof hydroponics" . . . "holistic bumbling / ballistic crumbling" . . . so much to marvel at! *smile* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Barley, it means a lot
The rhymer with those deep embedded loops,
gives syllabus its wingless, winless drift
I gasp to try to curb my startled "Oops!"
It's gone. To late to reclaim my word thrift.

With claims of understanding in the air.
Egg splattered all across the face of most.
The spill-proof milk of kindness is right there.
A grasp of nuance equals right to boast.

The bumbling, crumbling thoughts which scramble forth,
Preclude engaged hydrolics or the vape
Those Wild guesses thunder from the north.
Could they too be asearching for the grape.

Somewhere behind the lost and found of phrases,
we'll find the filthy high-brows (which amazes.)



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

A clever and succinct old-school wrap-up of the content, and it is badass... Inspired by, and absolu.. read more
To tell you the truth, I don't think I understood all of this. But I LOVED reading it. Such wonderful words tripping off the tongue. It was a cerebral treat!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

You and I, both, Astri... You and I, both, haha.... Thanks very much
Great Aunt Astri

1 Month Ago

It must have been your Muse at work!
Silente

1 Month Ago

I believe so, heh...
it is not easy to give up ones rational ordered sensible mind but one must when reading "Syllabus Re-Engaged" .. like much of your stuff .. the challenge is worth it as i am free ... and sense only .. the angst and sarcastic social voice .. if only how we say things..manipulate things .. can be frustrating for an honest soul ..
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Agreed, one must be without wings in space, not an ideal position... But one that must be taken none.. read more
After reading this, I kept coming back to "Rust evolves like holograms blue "--love the image that I get here along with colors.


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

Me too! I loved making that line... Who wouldn't correlate blue with holograms... Hollywood has set .. read more
*laughing* Not at the work, but at myself because I have to move my lips when I read your s**t or otherwise I miss too much!
Best line: "I see screams desecrate reams of paper on the floor" Inking screams and using reams of paper before they become coherent thought...*sigh* been there...done that!
I think we've both been out at the same time, I'm just back from a 3 week depressive episode and have much reading to do. I have to read your stuff by myself...cuz...you know...it's 'mbarrisin' to read to myelf moving my lips!
Another fine piece.
P.S. That scowl on your face - hmmph! Matches mine perfectly!


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Month Ago

I hear you on that one, been facing OVERWHELMING negativity in life... Lots of hard-knocks... But he.. read more

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