Superlative

Superlative

A Poem by Dolce Vita

I'm perfectly good at being the best
But I'm desperate for you to know it
I'll work 'til I'm pale to outshine the rest
So if I impress you, please show it.

I'm quite a w***e for compliments
There's no end to my industry
My clothes and my hair and my home and my cakes...
Stepford Wives have nothing on me.

I need to be your favourite
It doesn't matter to me who you are
I'll shove to the front with my fool's gold smile
As real as a tinsel star.

The paradox with being the best
Is that I also excel in disaster
No one will hurt you as well as I can
Or pull the ground from you faster.

I'll tear out your heart with a flourish
And add it to my pile
I'll reduce you to rubble with utmost class
That's just a perfectionist's style.

© 2017 Dolce Vita


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Nat
The first two stanzas read like song lyrics to me.
The poem effectively brings out the character of the narrator.
Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dolce Vita

7 Years Ago

Thanks Nat, I hadn't thought of that but I am trying to work on some lyrics so that's good!
& I can so relate to this....

Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


PhoenixDown

7 Years Ago

Also great title
Dolce Vita

7 Years Ago

Hi, sorry I've been awol for a while. Thank you for what you said, it's good to know other people ha.. read more
PhoenixDown

7 Years Ago

No problem!
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Gee
Or pull the ground from under you faster....I think. !!
Have met a few chew 'em up spit 'em out women in my time, luckily I was as bad if not worse. Hi, enjoyed the read

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Gee

7 Years Ago

shite....as sure as eggs are eggs
Dolce Vita

7 Years Ago

Yes I'm not sure how many other lamb-kebab-blowjob poems are out there!
Gee

7 Years Ago

Ah, yes....got to post silly just to break up the serious...not many do !!

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