when things won't go right

when things won't go right

A Poem by Dom Gunn
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Late at night you try to do a little bit more when you really should be in bed and asleep.

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Now i get like that
Late at night
when things won't go right
I say good night
and curse like that

© 2011 Dom Gunn


Author's Note

Dom Gunn
I wrote this in response to a short story i found here that cursed the computer and the equipment and then they went to bed

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I like this poem alot...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


haha! I like the rhythm of the poem, the way the lines are set up. and thank you for your review, i'm glad I could provide a bit of inspiration. (it was a Windows computer, by the way) ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Dom Gunn
Dom Gunn

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia



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I recently started to write after many abortive attempts always getting bogged down in detail. Discovering Scrivener for windows this year has made all the difference to my ability to write. N.. more..

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