LOVE

LOVE

A Poem by Ben
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never think love can't come knocking at anytime

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Love is something we all want badly,
Love appears and we just grab it,
Love never allow us to see the truth.
For Love we could do foolish things,
For Love we act like a fool,
Love is the greatest thing to have,
Long lasting
Ongoing affection
Vivid passion
Everlasting.
I have Never had the chance to Know if someone that i Love actually Love me the same way; i do all i can to show my feelings and when i have the time to say i Love you i always make sure i seize the moment. She is an angel,she brings care with her, she also bring joy, she makes you happy and joyful, she goes to war and never lose, And when we are just confused about what we feel inside she even makes us know that such things can't be hidden nor can we ignore her; She is a part of us and she is LOVE. Can i get an answer to this - " what of lust?"


© 2014 Ben


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Ben
I JUST WANTED TO PUT SOMETHING DOWN AND I JUST GAVE AN UPDATE HOPE YOU ENJOY IT

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Ben
Thanks to you all, and thanks for your review

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ben,

Indeed... Love is blinding - No need for anything else

Great write.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy


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Posted 11 Years Ago


Sure lust is important, but not nearly as important as love.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


That's a good question.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow this is amazing. So true tho(:

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Posted 12 Years Ago


i love this poem, it makes perfect sense :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


good wrk...nice write:))keep writin..

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked and agree with the sentiment of your poem. Love is the greatest thing to obtain and give freely. A good poem here.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Love and lust together is the best.. but can one live without the other...yes...x

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Filled with honesty and passion...Great job on this... :)))

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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