Beleza muda (translation below)

Got the inspiration from a beautiful girl i met once at the restaurant with my friends, she was very beautiful ... but sadly she was mute :(

Muda beleza

que fala pelo som do

vento invernal.

Translation

Title: Mute beauty

Mute beauty

that speaks through the sound of

winter wind.

Author's Note

Tried to write a haiku in my mother tongue, portuguese.
Hope you like it =D

Reviews

[Bare trees]

This is a really nice poem. I can picture a nature type scene in my head while reading this. Perhaps snow-covered trees after a major storm has passed overnight. Very well done.

[Gomer LePoet]

Heck Dom - I have a hard time translating into English myself and its the only language I speak. the thought does reflect the beauty of the stillness of nothing but the wind though. nice thought :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

haha you're still missing some syllables. I guess it is difficult to translate a language to english with haikus.

Still, its a beautiful thought and does it's job with creating imagery to the reader. Nicely done, Dominic. :)

~Anna Rose

[Coyote Poetry]

Silence can speak to us. A interesting haiku. Could mean many things. A excellent poem.
Coyote