Duck Duck Goose

 

 

Intolerable acts

Compulsive acts

Inconclusive results

Unfulfilled dreams

Life’s waves crash upon me

 

Undeniable acts

 Infuriated acts

Ferocious results

Magnificent dreams

Life’s waves crash upon me

 

Unsatisfied days

Drunken nights

Fucked up girls

And trashed boys

Life’s waves crash upon me

 

Incomplete days

 

 

 Incomplete days

 Party nights

Crowded rooms

Yet internally secluded

Life’s waves crash upon me

 

Reviews

[Chiquita]

I stumbled across one of your poems and took off reading a few of them. They are full of secrecy and pain. You seem right on the verge of revealing yourself in so many of them. You talk about hiding yourself, the true you. You talk about a numbness inside. You seem tough on the outside but I know from experience that kind of exterior only masks a soft center.

This piece is much more revealing of who you are. I like it a lot. This sums it up for me, "Crowded rooms

Yet internally secluded".

[SamSarcasm]

very nice. love the flow, imma surfer.