The Sweet Forest

The Sweet Forest

A Poem by sedona._.arizona

The Sweet Forest 

The air is sweet.
I breathe it in,
 taking in all the senses.

Harmonious chirps, 
making such sweet sounds.
The breeze brings in the blissful crunch of the trees around.

I feel myself drifting.
Slowly forgetting everything.
That's when the gunshot rang out. 

© 2017 sedona._.arizona



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it was nice but in you middle stanza you ended with 'around' twice. maybe change the first to say something like " Harmonious chirps, in my ears the sweet sound" just a thought

Posted 11 Months Ago


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sedona._.arizona

11 Months Ago

Thank you. I noticed it after I was done with the poem, but I didn't think it ruined the flow, so I .. read more
Pepper

11 Months Ago

Only my opinion :)
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