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A Poem by Donicca Dona L

 Just you and me
miles away
sharing the same dark blue sky

© 2017 Donicca Dona L



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You say so much in so few words. What a talent. Great work

Posted 3 Months Ago


i love this
it talks about how even through long distances and far stretches of land
two people who care and love each other can find ways to stay connected, spiritually and emotionally.
love has no boarders and lines. if you care for someone, make an effort to make it work.
even if things get dark and sad, they still finds way to keep themselves together, connected by vast spaces of endless time
this was short and simple but still left a mark on my mind, a realization.
thank you for writing this

Posted 3 Months Ago


laying down and holding hands
staring at your eyes
wondering if your heart will ever make mine cry


Sorry, my depressed self had to continue.

Nice one, Donicca.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donicca Dona L

3 Months Ago

woow beautiful ...
ohh ur depressed self writes great if u ever need a friend i am around :.. read more
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Poignant piece of art from your heart and soul...a lovely read for me. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Donicca Dona L

4 Months Ago

thank you for ur time and review :)
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4 Months Ago

You are very welcome...the pleasure is all mine.
Soft as clouds, wistful as dusk, beautiful .. and true.
That's how it can be.. Sighing a thank you for letting me share such emotion


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donicca Dona L

4 Months Ago

I am really glad u like it :)
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

You're welcome.

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Donicca Dona L
Donicca Dona L

Podgorica, Tuzi, Montenegro



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Hello my name is Donika Lulgjuraj. I am from Montengro, Podgorica. I am an albanian writer. I published my first poem book in 2008 in albanian called ''Rruga e jetes'' translated '' the way of life'' .. more..

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