Now you just listen to me…

Now you just listen to me…

A Poem by Sean Allen
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You're not listening!!!

"

Now you just listen to me…

 

 

A better place the world would be,
if you stopped thinking differently!

 

if there was just one kind of tree
what disagreements could there be?

 

If all the fish that swim the sea,
could fly like birds so happily.

 

If I could do what pleases me,
and you just did what’s right by me.

 

But this most likely cannot be,
for God did make us to be free.

 

Yet, clearer could your own eyes see…
if I were you… and you were me!

© 2010 Sean Allen


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A better place the world would be,
if you stopped thinking differently!----------I think, I have to disagree. world needs diversity. We need free spirits which recognize - this world is about modern slavery.

Exactly, we living in western democracies are free, that's why we chose - and watch our consequence.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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But this most likely cannot be,
for God did make us to be free.



Yet, clearer could your own eyes see…
if I were you… and you were me!...yes god did make us free,some do value this freedom and some abuse it,words of wisdom there...thoroughly enjoyed reading it..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it .. and it is true and as for me i am with you and listening ~

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha I like this and it's one hundred percent correct it would be correct if you did what's right by me too lol I like how you write it is great (and I'm sure you aren't trying to say DO AS I SAY but i think i get what you mean ) lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am reading you !....but I do not agree...we all certain fav. colors.. not one is the same.. even if we painted.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this reminds me of a john lennon song that's always annoyed me. in the song Imagine he says this "i hope some day you'll join us. then the world will live as one." so much for diversity.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If everyone liked the same ice cream we would be out of vanilla in a week.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A better place the world would be,
if you stopped thinking differently!----------I think, I have to disagree. world needs diversity. We need free spirits which recognize - this world is about modern slavery.

Exactly, we living in western democracies are free, that's why we chose - and watch our consequence.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm listening . . .

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sean Allen
Sean Allen

West Haven, CT



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