Need love

Need love

A Poem by Donyay Thomas

Why does it hurt so much?
Not feeling loved by someone
Happy faces are everywhere
But where is mine?
I just want to be held
I want to feel beautiful
I want to be loved
Why does it hurt so much?
The more I wait
The more pain I'm in
It feels like my heart has been ripped out
over and over again.
Do i even have a heart?
I just want to be loved

© 2017 Donyay Thomas



Author's Note

Donyay Thomas
Hey tell me what you think. I see this a lot so i decided to write about it

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As you say, it is a common feeling. All of us crave love and sometimes it seems very elusive. Nicely constructed poem, with the repetitions emphasizing the point and helping to hold it together.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Donyay Thomas

4 Months Ago

Thanks for reading
I like it I can relate to the feeling of the poem.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Donyay Thomas

4 Months Ago

Thanks for reading I'm glad you like it

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Added on July 3, 2017
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