Love hurts

Love hurts

A Poem by Donyay Thomas

It hurts not wanting to be the one
It hurts being pushed away
It hurts to stay even though I'm not wanted
It hurts to wait for him
It hurts trying to be notice
It hurts to not love
But loving someone also hurt
It hurts more than being someone I'm not
The pain I'm in
The more I fade away
Love will always hurt

© 2017 Donyay Thomas



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Donyay Thomas
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You expressed your emotions really well.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Donyay Thomas

4 Months Ago

Thanks for reading I'm glad you like it
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

You're welcome. :)
Works well, with the repetition emphasizing the thrust of the writing... 'hurts'.

It won't always hurt, by the way.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Donyay Thomas

4 Months Ago

I haven't really been in love But i know what it does to people

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