Lost

Lost

A Poem by Donyay Thomas

During the day I'm cold hearted
Not worrying about everything
Not wanting to feel everyone's pain
But at night I'm a total mess
I break down into tears
I feel the pain that people were in
I see happiness I feel the happiness
No matter how i feel or how i see things
I'm always lost waiting to be found
Everything is drifting away especially me
But the only thing that is left is pain
I'm lost

© 2017 Donyay Thomas



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I think you feel your situation deeply... It's often in the night hours that we feel our loneliness and our desires burn, our needs intensify...

Posted 3 Months Ago


I can really relate. As you can probably tell from my username I too feel lost. All I can say is poetry helps a lot with that. Keep at it! The only thing I'd say is that I feel like you could have delved a little more into the contrast between your days and nights. There's so much more emotion you could add. Overall, I really enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Months Ago



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Added on August 3, 2017
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