Wow, "He kneels their souls unbowed in anguish as the night whispers betray"
Signifies that a demon impersonates an Angel with a sword and when the victims lower their guard, it cuts their heads, then they become whisperers for infinity because before reaching Heaven, they gave up as they kneeled, they looked down and they gave their heads to the demon disguised as an Angel.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Squinkla. A very interesting interpretation of this senryu. I a.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing, Squinkla. A very interesting interpretation of this senryu. I appreciate your time and words.
One is able to feel His abandonment with the few words you have so carefully chosen: "He kneels there solus." Your senryu is powerfully dramatic. What an accomplished writer you are, Doodley. You must be an Aussie. :)
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Tamara. Indeed, I am Australian, yet poetry crosses all borders.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing, Tamara. Indeed, I am Australian, yet poetry crosses all borders and is exclusive to all. I appreciate your time and kind thoughts on my writing.
4 Months Ago
Hi, dodley. I'm from Brisbane. Live in the US now. :)
This image and Senryu are perfectly unforgettable. Beautiful words, form, profundity, meaning. We would have been bowed. He was not. Hallelujah. Amen. Great write!
Posted 11 Months Ago
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11 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Annette. I appreciate you stopping by and taking a look at my t.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing, Annette. I appreciate you stopping by and taking a look at my take on the events of that fateful night.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Thoughts In Time. I appreciate these wise words. Very true. Wel.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing, Thoughts In Time. I appreciate these wise words. Very true. Welcome to my poetic domain.
11 Months Ago
I just love this poem it expresses so much - those in contact with spirit will understand🌹
This made me think of Jesus, that's the garden he was in the night before he was betrayed right? Does this have a religious context?
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11 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Ewan. Yes, the religious context is plainly obvious. However no.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing, Ewan. Yes, the religious context is plainly obvious. However not all poetry is as straightforward as it may read. I appreciate the time. Welcome to my poetic domain.
I like 'unbowed' posture while living in 'anguish'..many times some chapters are unforgettable in life in a true sense while the ink of loyalty in those are completely faded away..beautiful
Posted 11 Months Ago
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11 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Mou. I appreciate the kind words.
Wow, "He kneels their souls unbowed in anguish as the night whispers betray"
Signifies that a demon impersonates an Angel with a sword and when the victims lower their guard, it cuts their heads, then they become whisperers for infinity because before reaching Heaven, they gave up as they kneeled, they looked down and they gave their heads to the demon disguised as an Angel.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Squinkla. A very interesting interpretation of this senryu. I a.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing, Squinkla. A very interesting interpretation of this senryu. I appreciate your time and words.