4 seasons of love

Starts from spring-winter.

Love rising like the spring seeds.
Stir me for I've been hibernating.
Give it a chance to pour on us.
Sunshines in your eyes, I trust

Seasons continually evolving.
Are we prepared darling.
The primary rain of vernal.
The principal warmth of summer.
The primary reap of fall.
The principal snowflakes of winter.

Summer goes so fast, how I wish it would last.
Love growing like crops, beautiful forecast.
Blending our souls. Swimming pools.
We already know, kids enrolling to school.

Seasons continually evolving.
Are we prepared darling.
The primary rain of vernal.
The principal warmth of summer.
The primary reap of fall.
The principal snowflakes of Winter.

Autumn is here, this we give thanks.
Leafs falling, plants turning. Loves still burning.
It's harvest time, it's so hard to bear.
Love is tested next, we must prepare.

Seasons continually evolving.
Are we prepared darling.
The primary rain of vernal.
The principal warmth of summer.
The primary reap of fall.
The principal snowflakes of winter.

Long bitterly cold, be patient love it'll pass.
Short days, low temp, with you every moment that pass.
Our loves so deep, start to see, snow melting at our feet.
We made it to a new year. Time for sleep.

Author's Note

I tried to compare and combine the elements of each season with elements of love while also rhyming. Please give me feedback!

Reviews

[Jordan Meaike]

This is my favorite piece of yours! You're an amazing writer.

[DookieSmiles]

Thanks you! That means a lot!

[Bobby]

Comparing and combining the elements of love and the seasons worked really well. I'm not to good with reviews but when I read something I like I defiantly take time to leave a positive comment, keep it up

[DookieSmiles]

Thank you for taking the time to comment! It keeps me motivated to keep writing! Love the feed back

[Janet91Rochester]

This will work well as lyrics. I liked it alot

[DookieSmiles]

Thank you very much for taking time to give me a review! You think like folk music or what genre?

[Janet91Rochester]

i love folk so i'm a little biased towards it ;)

But im no musician so cant say...

[DookieSmiles]

Yes I love folk also it's what I like to listen to while I write

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow your 4 seasons of love has a very good taste. I must say you combine the elements of each season with elements of love very well :) Cheers to you!

[DookieSmiles]

Thank you!!! I'd like to try to convert some of my writing into songs but not to that stage yet 🍻

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

I like it it's different, you had a strong concept and I think you got your point across. :)

[DookieSmiles]

Thank you very much. Finally a review lol! Was starting to feel silly!

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

don't never feel silly about you're writing you got real talent :)