Fear

6-word story for a contest :D

 Fear

Nothing but darkness surrounds me.

Author's Note

Heehee, easy enough to make. It's a 6-word story for a contest. It was fun--so much but so little in the story. XD

Reviews

[writingcrazy55555]

LOVE IT! What a wonderful little poem!!!!! I respect writers who can say so much... with so little. Meaningful, fresh, fluid, and very well-written!! Excellent work! I can't wait to see some more of your work in the future! I love your use of simple but extemely meaningful vocabulary too!!! Truly wonderful and spectactular!

[Starcaller]

Ha! Really cool :3

[Cherrie Palmer]

nice job 6 words are more than enough to capture an image

[A. L. Allen]

You perfectly captured the feeling of fear in only six words. I like how you put the word 'darkness' in bold to really emphasize it and to make it more, well, dark. :)

Very nicely done! :D

[The XYZ Writer]

Haha, I wish I'd have got over my fear of heights. But its not gone yet. :P But this describes fear very nicely. Especially claustrophobia. *shudders*
Good job and good luck!

[Summer D.]

:P I recently got rid of my fear of spiders..
- is so proud-

So I really like this story. :)
Good Luck in the competition love!

[Jasmine Thousand]

I like it. Accurately describes fear too :)

[Summer'sBreeze]

really good ^-^

[Melinda Weber]

very true :) it does give the imagination some juice.