Uniform Nature

Uniform Nature

A Poem by ~Dragon X
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Mowing the lawn from two completely different perspectives. o3o

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The bright skies

The shining sun

Tell lies

  Lies here are none.

 

The truth is here

Hidden at first

But it's severe

It is cursed.

 

A giant tearing machine

It roars and buckles and jeers

The man behind it has a heartless routine

Sounds of our screams he never hears.

 

Our unique curls are snatched

Our crawling friends die

Leaving us uniform and matched

And he doesn't utter a sigh.

 

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What a beautiful lawn

All the weeds are gone

Pests are out of the way

Such a bright day.

 

The lawn mower purrs to me

Making the grass neat and tidy

 Stocky short and cute

The lawn mower I scoot.

 

My wife in the bed will love this

This labor I do for her bliss

The kids in their rooms will be happy

They won't need to get busy.

 

Weeds are so ugly

Insects are crazy

The grass grows wild

Good thing I keep them mild.


© 2012 ~Dragon X



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Author's Note

~Dragon X
I'm experimenting here. o3o I wanted to do the first half with one rhyme scheme, and then the last half a different one. This is how the first one goes:
a
b
a
b

While the second half goes:
a
a
b
b
I've noticed that the first rhyme-scheme style tends to be more deep and ominous, while the second rhyme scheme is somehow airy, light, and playful. :D

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i love it its smart and elegant and very creative i love it

Posted 5 Years Ago


A beautiful piece of art.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I always love your poems cause they're so cute and funny, and have different ways of thinking. :) I love this experiment Sunny! Please make more soon!!!!

*99*

P.S- Great rhyme scheme.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Hahaha, I love this! The two different points of view are humorous when put together. :) I love your experimentation with the rhyme schemes. I think it turned out great!

Once again, another fantabulous write! :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Very nice, I liked it a lot..

Posted 5 Years Ago


LOL
Dragon this is fantastic!
I love the part from the grass's point of view XD
Love it great write!!
*100*

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow I never noticed that about rhyme schemes, but it's true!!! I love it, absolutely amazing. LOL, the weeds part was funny!!! And I could almost imagine the sun, lawnmower.... I'm going to get a glass of lemonade. :)

You've done it again, Dragonling. Why have you never placed in a contest before?
Spectacular work.

**100*

Posted 5 Years Ago


lol! Somehwat funny in a completly sad way XD very interesting.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on March 13, 2012
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Tags: Lawn, fear, love, fun, light, clean, weeds, weed, insect, insects

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