Love songs

I've got to stop listening to love songs
It's making me miss you
Makes me think of all my wrongs
I think of what I could undo
but then I think
and I know it was all me
man, these love songs have me on the brink
They make me unsure what to think.

I've got to stop listening to love songs

Author's Note

I know I said I wouldn't write about love...but I guess I'm just going to write whatever I feel at this point. I hate writing so many of these, but this is a very true poem

Reviews

[Viki Rachel]

I'm glad to see you're still experimenting with rhyme schemes and not sticking to the bland ABAB. Typo in line three: Makes me *THINK of all my wrongs. I hate to be so nit-picky, but your best work can only be your best work when it is in mint condition.
This poem is laced with sorrowful regret which the reader feels throughout the single stanza. I like that the starting line ("I've got to stop listening to love songs") is also the conclusion. That ties it all up in a nice little package and makes the ending more resolute and powerful.

[Tasha]

"I've got to stop listening to love songs" Amazing.
♥ Ta'Shandra