Sometimes

Sometimes

A Poem by Collette Paige

Sometimes when I'm lonely
I imagine you beside me
Sometimes when I feel invisible
I imagine you can see me
Sometimes when I miss you
I imagine you're still here with me
Sometimes when I feel hated
I imagine you still love me.

© 2011 Collette Paige


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DAAAAMMMNNN Collette! This is brilliant.
It all ties together beautifully. I like your format: Italic, Bold, Italic, Bold. It gives a different volume and tone of voice to each line. Though it's a short stanza, it is just as impressive as any long poem I've ever read!
You're really improving in your writing, Collette. You should be proud of this piece--and yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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DAAAAMMMNNN Collette! This is brilliant.
It all ties together beautifully. I like your format: Italic, Bold, Italic, Bold. It gives a different volume and tone of voice to each line. Though it's a short stanza, it is just as impressive as any long poem I've ever read!
You're really improving in your writing, Collette. You should be proud of this piece--and yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Collette Paige
Collette Paige

Grapevine, TX



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I like to write short stories and am working on some novels of my own. I know I'm not much, but to me this kind of like my life. I love music to my heart's content, so that's something I willing t.. more..

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